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Where the Mind Goes

Where the mind goes, is anyone’s guess It retreats, moves forward, to clean up mess It rises, it sinks and it takes us for a ride Or shuts us down, just wanting to hide Today is today, tomorrow is brand new Like the flip of a coin or the tie of a shoe Consistent beliefs, are planted deep Sometimes elate us or make us weep The soul sings along, keep on going To blossoms from seeds, you are sowing Hold onto love, with every heartbeat Then sit in contentment, take a seat Sit with yourself, through all the throes It is anyone’s guess, where the mind goes Heidi Sands 6/21/18

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Arturo Michael

Date: 7/13/2018 11:15:00 AM

If you let it ...it might fly away...it must be tamed to be free to go its way...Nice write Heidi...I like it...

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/13/2018 11:23:00 AM

Interesting, it must be tamed Arturo. Thank you for your kind feedback :) I am happy you like it.

Bella Holt

Date: 7/6/2018 6:56:00 PM

I love your poems! This is a perfect epitome of the thoughtfulness emotions can receive from the way you can twist words! Well done! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/7/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Bella :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/5/2018 1:37:00 PM

A beautiful poem tied w/a artfully done bow, Heidi. Love and smiles always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/5/2018 1:46:00 PM

Thank you Freddie! It is nice to see you. I hope all is well :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/30/2018 2:37:00 PM

Oh I like this. Reads so well, rhyme and rhythm excellent. A lot of truth here too. :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/30/2018 10:14:00 PM

Thanks so much :)

Michael Dillinger

Date: 6/27/2018 9:24:00 PM

Really good.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thank you Michael :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 6/25/2018 10:10:00 AM

Awesome. Who knows the secret of mind? Nice one Heidi, specially the rhyme I appreciate.Again, awesome, Rhymequeen.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2018 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Rajat. I appreciate your comment :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/25/2018 8:17:00 AM

An awesome depiction of the human mind Heidi as it seems were always changing our brain channel!~Che :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2018 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Cheryl :)

Lunita Blanca

Date: 6/23/2018 4:27:00 PM

My good friend, memory is a storehouse of used parts from which we can make new wholes.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2018 4:53:00 PM

Thank you Carlos :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 6/23/2018 4:07:00 PM

The mysterious mind. What a perfect poem, all aspects of our mind' s exhausting patterns that we still try to control. A great topic, a great write.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2018 4:52:00 PM

Thank you Sandra :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2018 5:54:00 PM

The mind takes us on a ride sublime..Well expressed Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2018 4:52:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Bette Bavington

Date: 6/22/2018 9:05:00 AM

Heidi. This is an excellent way to show that our mind Is a super computer that is in control of all that happens in our body. Great poem. Thank you for visiting my site.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you for your comment and feedback Bette. You are welcome as well :)