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Where Sunsets Hide

Sweet wafts of ambrosia fill me up as your painted fingers etch across my holy sanctum crimson cries of passion scream out loud and you have barely scratched the surface Come caress my night where sunsets hide dip your tepid toes into my pool of trust drench my soul with your spirit's neon glow where starshine ignites pleasured pulses amid first moments of our ardor show

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Date: 8/29/2017 2:23:00 PM
Tim I love this poem, I like the second verse the best.The second line Dip your tepid toes into my pool of trust. Is the line that speaks to me. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/16/2017 5:50:00 AM
Passion rises as sunset hides...Beautiful write Tim
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Date: 7/15/2017 3:21:00 PM
Oooh so passionate Tim.
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Date: 7/15/2017 9:06:00 AM
Lovely and passionate words, Tim...and barely the surface has as yet been scratched!! // paul
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Date: 7/15/2017 8:49:00 AM
Hi Tim , plenty of passion ,great write :)))))
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Date: 7/15/2017 7:22:00 AM
Wow! Once you got started it got hot pretty quick. Hot sauce for the heart. Nice one Tim:)
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Date: 7/14/2017 7:58:00 PM
muy caliente, Tim.
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Date: 7/14/2017 7:47:00 PM
This I some hot and steamy stuff!
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Date: 7/14/2017 7:25:00 PM
now those are some fireworks Tim.....
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