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Where Shadows Roam

Where Shadows Roam The space next to the window dancing darkness on display shards of life from far away In the corner sharing shadows safe haven or safely hidden from the progress of the sun thoughts creep in unbidden Life is slipping slowly all connections are eroding time is coming near end anxiety and fear Words worm their way in deep oublietting me from sleep

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/25/2018 4:56:00 AM

Good Morning Sara. I hope this day finds you well. I absolutely love this entry. You have captured such an essence are aura that surrounds this moment. Your words truly tell a story. And yes, the attached image is marvelous. Well done

Sara Ella
Date: 3/28/2018 8:26:00 PM

Hello Lisa :) Thank you so much! It is so good to hear from you <3

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/3/2017 10:02:00 PM

Excellent description and deep write. Beautiful picture. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing it. Also thanks for your comment on my proverb.

Sara Ella
Date: 12/3/2017 11:14:00 PM

Thank you Ravi :) <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/27/2017 10:07:00 PM

I came to read this gem again! hugs!

Sara Ella
Date: 11/29/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Art for the visit :) Hugs back!! <3

Chris Hagy

Date: 11/26/2017 4:22:00 PM

Beautiful, deep write! Love the pix too!...I know a gray barn cat named Shadow! :) Nicely penned, have great day Sara :)

Sara Ella
Date: 11/26/2017 5:34:00 PM

Thank you Chris :) I hope you have a great day too!

Gayle Rodd

Date: 11/22/2017 3:33:00 PM

...shards of life from far away" love it! This makes me wanna crawl into the cozy corner of my room

Sara Ella
Date: 11/23/2017 1:28:00 AM

Yes <3 Thank you Gayle :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/11/2017 6:21:00 PM

I love your poem Sara, so beautifully written and I too love the line " Dancing darkness on display"... hugs and smiles :)

Sara Ella
Date: 11/11/2017 6:44:00 PM

Thank you Akkina :) <3 Hugs back!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/28/2017 1:56:00 PM

This is my 3rd reading and I am still trying to figure out my reaction. The word oblietting gives me the shivers. It is so severe and makes me think of being tossed away to be forgotten.

Sara Ella
Date: 10/28/2017 2:22:00 PM

Patricia, I think that you have hit on the reference: obliette. It is a dark place. Thank you :)