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Where Rivers Rarely Flow

In the chill of the night your closeness seduces me and warms this tepid soul let me linger lightly upon your body and lie down across those loving fields brush your passions against my holy spirit touch my temple of knowledge with feathery delight enter my ruins and rebuild my humanity where heated rivers rarely flow be the comfort that's always wanted and the needed cover to my bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/30/2017 11:13:00 AM
Down the mountain the river flows, through the meadow where wildflowers grow, a life giving stream, for a heart in a dream, asleep neath the weeping willow:)
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Date: 1/30/2017 10:53:00 AM
Very passionate and beautiful. Tim, you do write the sweetest poem and of course I love them all and enjoy reading them :)
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Date: 1/30/2017 10:40:00 AM
Dear, Tim, always a pleasure to read such well-crafted poetry!
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Date: 1/30/2017 7:28:00 AM
Indeed sensualy penned but with a soul to it...You're in a great mood to write ..and I like it .
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:05:00 PM
This is a fun little poem, it had me thinking for a while, but I think I get it :) I love personifications, time I try to write one myself.
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Date: 1/29/2017 8:20:00 PM
wow, I love the personification you showed us with this gem. Also I saw your fun limerick at Joe's post. Yours was my second favorite limerick!!Daniel's was a HOOT.
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Date: 1/29/2017 8:03:00 PM
Great write! Read as well. Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/29/2017 7:29:00 PM
A very sensual beautiful poem!
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