Where Ravens Cry

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Submission for Emile Pinet's poetry contest "Ottava Rima",
I appreciate your consideration.
 
Ottava Rima
The Ottava Rima is a unique and captivating form of poetry composed of eight eleven-syllable lines with an a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c rhyme scheme. It was developed by Tuscan poets in the late thirteenth and early fourteenth centuries.
 
Where Ravens Cry

Beneath ancient boughs, where woeful ravens cry,
Our souls entwined, chilling winds around us creep.
The fragrance of midnight blossoms drifts nearby,
As dense fog enshrouds the glade in cryptic sleep.
With every touch, spectral fire ignites the sky,
Like graves in soft silver light, desires dig deep.
A moonlit serenade whispers through the trees,
Love’s dark melody carried upon the breeze.

Under the starlit sky, our bodies entwine,
Beneath a shroud of mystic mist, passions play.
Azure eyes, like haunted sapphires, darkly shine,
And guide my love through the night’s bewitching sway.
Each amorous moan, a ghostly lover’s sign,
An unholy union, our vows will betray.
A moonlit serenade borne on raven wings,
In our pounding hearts, love’s dark melody sings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/13/2024 9:49:00 PM
Hello Edward! Ah, yes, the fascinating ravens! As an artist, their beauty is magical. I recently read a book abt raves’ abilities. It’s no wonder they fascinate us umans. In this excellent poem, you extend the mystique to love, passion, with masterful ability!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/13/2024 10:30:00 PM
Sally, I share your fascination with these mystical birds. They are very intelligent and brave creatures, just absolutely beautiful, IMO. The myths, folklore and occult ties are underserved, however, certainly add to the mystic allure of these enchanted beasts. Thank you for stopping in and leaving a wonderfully engaging comment Sally. May your sweet dreams take flight, on raven wings beneath the moonlight.
Date: 7/8/2024 10:20:00 AM
My goodness! (As I fan myself) this was passionate and evocative! Such lovely poetic words, full of imagery and emotion. Congratulations on your win! Xo
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/8/2024 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Crystol, I am so pleased you enjoyed this one!! I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and write a response. It means so much to me.
Date: 6/30/2024 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations Edward! Your amazing poem, "Where Ravens Cry," has placed Third in my contest. It stood out with its superb use of imagery. Very well done, my friend.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/30/2024 2:36:00 PM
What an honor Emile. I can’t thank you enough. Your support means everything. What a fun format. Thank you so much.
Date: 6/15/2024 10:08:00 PM
Truly captivating poem flowing perfectly. I have never attempted an Ottiva Rima, looks complicated, however I'm sure its going to do well. Good luck in the contest...Maria
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/16/2024 6:17:00 AM
Thank you kindly for the well wishes Maria. I am pleased you enjoyed this unique poem, it is my first time using this format, not too complicated. Give it a go
Date: 6/14/2024 4:13:00 PM
Two stanzas with Ottava Rima form, not easy to compose, especially for me. But you did well. Best for a win.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/14/2024 5:18:00 PM
Very Kind of you Victor, Thank you so much. This is my first time using this format, never heard of it before, so figured I’d challenge myself. Ha, it’s OK. But your support and encouragement mean more than you know. Thanks again Friend
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