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Where Once Was My Butt!

I fancied a look in the mirror My horror could not have been clearer Where once was my butt Sits, I don’t know what I dare not now stand any nearer There’’re so many new lines and creases Dismay at this sight never ceases Yet, it’s what I see This butt is on me At least there are still just two pieces!

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Warren Doll

Date: 4/26/2024 5:37:00 AM

Nichael, hilarious limerick ~ Warren

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/26/2024 5:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Warren!

Charles Messina

Date: 4/9/2024 2:13:00 AM

LOL- Hilarious! Love the ending! Have a great Tuesday and rest of the week, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/9/2024 3:52:00 AM

Thank you Charlie, a great week to you too!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/31/2024 2:55:00 PM

LOL! great write Mike. Thanks for the laugh. Happy Easter :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/31/2024 5:26:00 PM

Happy Easter Heidi xxoo

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/31/2024 1:18:00 PM

hahaha...gravity does its best to destroy us! Nice limerick Mike. :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/31/2024 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Linda !!!

Ink Empress

Date: 3/31/2024 8:04:00 AM

Hah a funny limerick, how time sometimes shows us something we dread looking at as we remember what the mirror showed us many moons ago, that youv captured very well here. Altho i cant resonate yet to this I absolutely love the humor in this and the rhymes. So wel articulated and delivered, changes and what it seems to be. It is what it is. Pleasure reading you after a while

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2024 7:32:00 AM

Some changes does come with aging which we can either laugh about or get depressed and I prefer the first one. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. May this be a great Easter Sunday for you. Sara K

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/31/2024 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Sara!!