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Where Once They Rode

Their sadness sounds from distant hills, Drums speaking strength, valor not lost Calling warriors to give might and will Victories now but at what cost. Now drums guide dancers' whirling feet Their sadness sounds from distant hills Warriors' hearts feel a quiet defeat Memories of greatness~silenced, still. Lilting birds' calls, flute answers trills Music caught in enchantment's lures Their sadness sounds from distant hills Voices of flute, lonesome and pure. Over vast land they hunted game Days now lost of conquests and skills Spirits sigh for those times untamed Their sadness sounds from distant hills.

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Date: 12/22/2021 6:11:00 AM
Brilliant write in this not easy to execute form. Much enjoyed the essence of your poem, Ann. Wonderful rhythm throughout---and your repeating line resounds with your message.
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/22/2021 9:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. It's a poem I've wanted to write for a long time. These people were subjects of most of my paintings. Still proud people but rejected by most of us. Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/21/2021 4:01:00 PM
Just beautiful Ann ! I love their sadness sounds from distant hills . I had a visceral response when reading this and was taken back in space and time to the moments you poignantly created . Blessings and happy holidays. Susan :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/22/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, for feeling my poetry. Your poetry tugs at my heart. Such a sad song these people now sing. Thanks for the visit :) Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/21/2021 3:07:00 PM
A marvelous quatern, Ann. I thoroughly enjoyed it. More! More!
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/24/2021 11:32:00 AM
Thanks, Milton. I'm gradually learning some of the poetry forms. I had no idea! I appreciate your thoughtful words.

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