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Where My True Love Lives - a Ballade

Seared upon my soul for ever more
That break of dawn upon a summer morn
As I made my way along that rocky shore
Strewn with remnants from a raging storm
When through a rising mist of gray - so forlorn
I saw a badly broken sinking ship
With canvas wings of white so sadly torn 
There beneath those majestic purple cliffs

And as that mighty fearless ocean roared 
With salty breezy breath so filled with scorn
I saw it rise up from the ocean floor
Wrapped in a velvet coat so frayed and worn 
A red, red, rose impaled upon a thorn 
Where passion bled like rain from ruby lips 
Upon a vivid memory reborn 
There beneath those majestic purple cliffs 
      
The wind - it whispered - in my ear - Lenore		
As black clouds in the sky began to form		
Into a face I’d never seen before			
With hollow cheeks that endless tears adorned	
That fell in frozen crystal drops so foreign..... 		
Then from those clouds his face began to slip  	
And I cried  the tears of a woman scorned 			
There beneath those majestic purple cliffs		

Lenore, the love he would forever mourn
That from his pen on page in words did drip
As I read his poetry and love was born
There beneath those majestic purple cliffs.


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Author:  Elaine George of Canada
 Written:  February 28, 2011

A tribute to: Edger Allen Poe and his Lenore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mitra Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 12:31 AM
Beautiful lines Elaine and Poetry at it's best..Congrats on your win.
George   Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 4:34 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, dear Carol...much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Hey there WHERE are you? How are you I wrote a new verse aabout the SEA [I remember you love sea writes]..called Do You hear What I hear..Oh how I wish you'd stop by and read it & say HEY! Please check in with your friends here we miss you. Light & Love
Haick Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 4:16 PM
'Laine, congratulations on this and the other exquisite poems of yours making it through tothe First Rounds of PS's Intl. Contest! Always a pleasure read! Thanks for your kind comments also. Love, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 10:59 PM
Congrats Lainie on have all three poems entered make it to first round competition in PS. contest luv..good luck...
Muzzey Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Lainie congratulations on placing in the first round with this fabulous Ballade, I love Poe and you did a marvelous job. I am most certain this will place high in the contest. Best to you~ Caryl
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Lainie. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Congrats Lainie on your ballade being featured. Picturesque story. God Bless. Vince
Austin Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Congrats on the selection, Lainie. Your love for Poe shines through on this one. Love, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Congrats Lainie on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all my friend with luv..
Esquire Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Dear Lady Elaine, WOW YOU are sure to be in the Winners Circle Into my Favs YOU have touched My Heart with this Tapestry of POETRY Thank-YOU LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Austin Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Yes. You have to fall in love with Lenore. Great images, Lainie. Love, Dave
Guzzi Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Majestic, marvelous, lushious!?[bad spell LOL] congrad's on this great ballade winning! Light & Love 7 & fav
Onclaud Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 8:27 PM
your use of language and the rhymes make this piece a real poetic read, elaine... my best CONGRATS you… huggs, :) nette
Pettit Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Beautifully written, Elaine. Congratulations on winning in the contest.
Muzzey Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 4:22 PM
A wonderful write. Congratulations on your fourth place win with this lovely Ballade. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 2:17 PM
This one is so mystical, Elaine and so gorgeously written. Great imagery. A very well deserved win. Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Beautifully penned ballade, Elaine. Congratulations on the win in the contest, Elaine
Brown Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:16 AM
To my favorites this one goes Lainie. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest my dear friend. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Dear Lainie, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Wonderfulyy formed and presented. A real winner. How did she chose? Congratulations Elaine. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 7:54 AM
This speaks of love just as the masters would speak of it.....with beauty and lovely verse. Wow, Elaine...just beautiful!! Congratulations on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Congrats Lainie on your big win in Catie's contest with this wonderful Ballade my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Maverick Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 8:39 AM
Hello Elaine, Very impressed - if you have seen my blog it might almost apply to me with a slight stretch of the imagination. All the best, hope to hear more of you, Joe
Poet Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:21 PM
excellent write here!nice imagery!A great entry into the contest.thanks a lot for ever inspiring words at my pages Elaine-kashinath
La France Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:50 PM
Just so stunning and outstanding a write full of deep emotion, I loved every word~~
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