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Where My Heart Has Been

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Contest H-Form-Hybronnet

sponsor Constance La France

My dear your eyes are where my heart has been you have looked deep into my soul with love to share with me a sacred covenant as we let go of the robes of disguise we'll wrap ourselves in love's gentle warm skin that's soft like the whispered breath of a dove ardent passion forever elegant graceful and refined as our heart replies depth and breadth of love have been born within to lift our spirits to the sky above where dreams we find airy and jubilant draped in raptured light from the sun to rise to wash over us a shimmering glow and frame our silhouette as one shadow

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Date: 10/1/2024 7:12:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, love the music, Constance
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Date: 9/22/2024 4:09:00 AM
I have read your winning work that placed in Constance's contest. Congratulations on being there. Way to go. I like the musical number that you chose to use. I have always liked that song. Sara K
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Date: 8/24/2024 11:01:00 AM
i have never written this form, no know about it.. but it seems like a sonnet that is unorthodox... As always you are very good at these..
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