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for Darcy

Where My Brush Strokes Linger

I woke trembling on the threshold of dawn 
as dappled sunlight through my window shone 
Upon my primed canvas there had been drawn 
a masculine image with finely chiseled cheekbones

What virile fantasy had I born while in flight 
for my hand to have created such a dashing face 
In stippled darkness of my dream-filled night, 
a handsome fantasy did I dare fondly embrace 

His eyes stared in wonder; tantamount to my own 
No angle shielded me from their deep penetration 
I held my breath, then released a soft guttural moan
as his strong hand guided mine without hesitation

Warm colors defined muscular features I painted
His hazel eyes were flecked with dustings of gold 
Flushed with desire, in a warm blush I was tainted 
when he faintly whispered, "To have and to hold"

My palette was awash in shades of crimson.  Soiled
with streaks of scarlet were my hands and gown 
My brush strokes lingered on his full lips as I toiled
imagining passion's kiss, in their depth I would drown 

I could not bear the thought of tearing myself away 
On and on I painted where his gentle hands led 
until finally wearied from hunger, upon my bed I lay
Unsated was a craving within me, a desire to be fed

With eyes closed, I hoped to dream of him once more,
of this man who had completely captivated my heart 
Come, handsome stranger. Find me as you did before
I cannot endure life if we must live it in dreams apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Cunningham Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Oozing with romance Lin, that's your trademark, how often we wake from a dream and thought how real it was, if we could choose our dreams we'd never wake up. Tom
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 1:46 PM
If only... Tom. Merci for your thoughts of how endearing our dreams can be.
Read Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 12:08 PM
I do tend to have that effect on the ladies lol, your certainly a artist with words Lin.xx
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 12:21 PM
Ladies, plural. lol John. Thank you for your kind compliment.
Narain Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 11:42 AM
I love Jan Allison's comment. Such a romantic poem.
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 12:20 PM
Thank you, Jay. Jan has her finger on my pulse.
One Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 9:22 AM
We've all been here... A sensual exploration of longing, imagination and the boundary between dreams and reality... You have created a very good poem here..
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Sometimes such reality takes place in a dream that there seems to be no boundary between the two. It's a beautiful place I'd choose never to leave. Thank you for reading me and leaving your thoughts.
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 8:19 AM
OMG Lin this is such a passionate piece - shame its only a dream! I love to look into the eyes of Mr Darcy too if he looks like the portrait! a massive fave! hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Sometimes dreams come true. You see in his eyes what I do. Drowning in them would not be a tragic death. Thanks for your sweet thoughts, Jan.
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