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Where Moonbeams Dance

Where moonbeams dance upon the ice on frosted lakes of arctic flow, a peaceful calm the night suffice where moonbeams dance. A tatted curtain veils the show of dappled blue white light precise dancing across the powdered snow. A scene so pure and simply nice that one cannot resist the show. My feet move freely on the bice where moonbeams dance.

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Date: 2/3/2024 10:23:00 PM
A lovely enjoyable poem in the Roundel form, Linda. I especially like the moving in each of the verse. Soup Mail Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2024 8:05:00 AM
Thanks dear Bill. I always appreciate your input! Thanks for the SM :)
Date: 2/3/2024 9:24:00 PM
Great job on painting a picture of the place you spoke about in your nice poem.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2024 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Miranda. I like to paint, with brush, and pen. :)
Date: 2/3/2024 5:22:00 PM
your imagery here was spectacular...I especially liked: 'a tatted curtain veils the show. Your poem had such a dreamy quality to it....I felt like I could actually dance on moonbeams. Nicely done, Linda...have a splendid evening, Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2024 8:04:00 AM
Many thanks my friend. Your visits always brighten my day Sara. :)
Date: 2/3/2024 9:56:00 AM
A gorgeous poem Laf, in the heat of this Summer's day, reading your amazing work took my to such a cool serene place as I felt the chill of moonbeams dancing on frosted ice. A spectacle to behold ! such imagery brought to the reader in such a unique way. Brilliant my friend, nothing less.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/3/2024 10:50:00 AM
You are a welcome visitor my darling friend. I so appreciate your visits and supportive comments. You are a light in my life. :)

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