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With waves splashing upon bended knee, majestic mountains rise from the sea. And Luna peeks from heaven above, admiring the beauty of our love. Frothy curls caress a sandy shore, subservient to time; nothing more. And a nightingale's melodic tune grieves for the sun and welcomes the moon. As Venus awaits the rise of Mars, twilight's freckled with emerging stars And paradise is where lovers lie, under a teal and indigo sky. Darkness inks the night in shades of black, but the moon rises to push it back. And the sand molds to body and soul, consistent with love's passionate role. Our promiscuity makes Mars blush, thus, this warrior dons a reddish flush. And a breeze titillates naked skin as two hearts meld into one; within. (Rhyme) 2/24/2016

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:41:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile.
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Date: 2/25/2016 11:36:00 AM
Nice one Emile, nice rhyme and flow too, enjoyed it!
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Date: 2/25/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Gordon, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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