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where life lies

so evocative to walk amongst the living or dead or to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/28/2023 7:52:00 AM
I enjoyed this monoku of thoughts. Three states of being were paralleled to their even existence.
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Date: 12/28/2023 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Hilda - I wrote the first bit but it got over explained as a longer poem, so felt it said more with less words. Thanks for commenting x

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