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Where is God hiding

In the cave of our heart, where no thought forms intrude, let us conjure a verse, impulsed by love divine, with no need to rehearse. In the cave of our heart, where love petals blossom, hark the clap of thunder; bliss reverberations, gripping soul in wonder. In the cave of our heart, we feel the truth impulse, light of our higher self, in endless renewal, reinventing itself. In the cave of our heart, hands folded in prayer, on giving love a nod, we’re awestruck to behold, the benign face of God.

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Date: 3/7/2024 9:12:00 AM
Dear US, your beautiful expressions of Divine depth are framed perfectly in the Monchielle Stanza form, where the repetition of the first line is especially impactful in the spiritual message of your verse. Congratulations for your win in Emile's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/7/2024 6:12:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement, Susan dear
Date: 3/1/2024 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for this well written poem!
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Date: 3/7/2024 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 3/1/2024 9:09:00 AM
Hearts are full of the best of ourselves, if only we choose to listen and follow. Lovely imagery dear friend. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/7/2024 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Linda dear
Date: 3/1/2024 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations Unseeking Seeker! Your poem "Where is God hiding", has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned you a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 3/7/2024 6:13:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, Emile and for the recognition

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