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Where Intention Once Stood

My thoughts walk barefoot on gravel roads—aching, slow, and scattershot. My mind drifts like dusk in worn linen—frayed, faded, and folding in on itself. My mind, grown tired of its tidy metaphors, slumps like a clerk at closing hour—unnoticed, necessary, numb. My brain, vast as prairie land at sunset, lies fallow—dreaming the hush between thunderclaps. My brain has taken the quiet path through woods not quite snowy nor lovely—just worn, and wondering where it last turned. My brain, a lantern gutted of oil, flickers faintly beneath the architecture of centuries—it remembers too much. My brain, a parched cathedral steeped in sermons long forgotten, weighs the dust in its own procession. My brain, a faded lyre, trembles with thoughts too tender to hold—each one a ghost of once-bright song. My brain, like Arthur's helm at gloaming, rests—dented by thought, dulled by long crusade. My brain, a theater haunted by a thousand borrowed tongues, performs rituals where intention once stood. Its voice speaks as though the soul were sharp as steel—blunt not by age, but by silence. Copyright © 2018 by Mickey Grubb

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Date: 8/5/2025 4:26:00 PM
Outstanding poem, Mickey! My once well-intentioned brain seems to have its own design since I began aging... I enjoyed each couple of lines but especially liked these: My brain, a parched cathedral steeped in sermons long forgotten, weighs the dust in its own procession. Deep stuff here! have a splendid evening, Sara
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 8/6/2025 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara. You got it. Happy you enjoyed the piece.
Date: 8/5/2025 1:49:00 PM
Ahh the pleasantries of aging. Still, it ain't all bad. The brain is a marvel. Wonderful creation still not entirely understood. Awesome poetry Mickey
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 8/6/2025 8:09:00 AM
True! Even in its wear, the brain remains a mystery and a marvel. Glad the poem sparked that thought. Thanks for checking it out...
Date: 8/5/2025 12:06:00 PM
You're an excellent poet Mickey. I enjoyed your expressive poem about memory.
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 8/6/2025 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Riley. Your words are too kind, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.

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