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Where I hear your cry

Evening mesmerized by the cheery skies
Meanders on hills where a lone bird flies
Shining breezy meadows swaying twilight
Foretelling arrival of a glamorous night

Stars then plant a twinkle in your eyes
Beaming cosmic hues seeking new highs
Gifting to earth a romantic enterprise
Setting ardent stage for an eternal prize

What you don't say echoes in your heart
I know you mean it right from the start
When smile on your lips tells me the story
Scripted eloquently by eyes of your glory

You react gleefully touched by my kiss
Love soon blossoms rejoicing in bliss
Why then you exit without a goodbye
Etching my heart where I hear your cry

August 19, 2018
Placed first in contest #535 by Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2019 9:43:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/4/2019 7:39:00 PM

Sometimes, saying goodbye is very difficult indeed. The heart will always feel the tender beat, of the other. An echo always comes back. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/13/2018 5:03:00 AM

Hi Vijay, a beautiful piece of romance from your pen, I love the gentle flow and the wonderful rhyming. Your words share such wonderful images to the mind Vijay. I love the twist at the end, giving the piece a tinge of sadness. Wonderful work. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Maria Williams

Date: 9/8/2018 5:50:00 AM

A beautifully romantic poem Vijay, picture perfect images you depict with your words. A sad twist at the end further giving it that bitter sweet finale. A definite Fave for me....Maria hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2018 6:48:00 AM

Many thanks maria..I am delighted by your visit and comments.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 9/1/2018 2:58:00 PM

Your words here have touch my heart, believe me that nobody can write this poem better than you have, it is truly a masterpiece and going straight into my fav, I am glad that I come across this one, many thanks for reading my poem, good luck and have a really nice day

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Faraz..appreciate your comments..so glad you liked it.

nette onclaud

Date: 8/30/2018 10:27:00 AM

touched by the bittersweet mood of your melody with a great turn in the end, vijay... you excel!....huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2018 6:50:00 AM

Thank you, nette.

Jo Daniel

Date: 8/30/2018 1:49:00 AM

A sad ending to a wonderful tale of love, Vijay:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/30/2018 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Jo.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 8/26/2018 3:33:00 AM

Outstanding creation. Loved it. Full mark from me.......... With love//Manmath

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/30/2018 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Manmath.

Pixie Dust

Date: 8/25/2018 10:13:00 AM

Dear dear Vijay, Thank you . For your presence. Have a blessed day.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2018 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Pixie.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/25/2018 8:27:00 AM

Oh... A moving climax...But I loved the imagery and the flow... Such a beautiful piece...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2018 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Supraja.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2018 8:21:00 AM

This has a whimsical feel and surprised me with the sad conclusion.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2018 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Richard.

Teppo Gren

Date: 8/24/2018 6:18:00 AM

A lovely and moving verse, Vijay, which flows beautifully. Such a sad ending. T.J

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thank you T. J...always happy to read your feedback.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/23/2018 10:11:00 PM

Bittersweet!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thank you Kim.

Pixie Dust

Date: 8/23/2018 5:29:00 PM

When I read your poems the heart blossoms, even through the recent grief. Thank you for your condolence message, Have a nice evening dear Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2018 3:13:00 PM

Thank you Pixie. My thoughts and prayers are with you as you find your way through your recent loss.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/23/2018 9:57:00 AM

Fabulous imagery Vijay, well done my friend,,,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2018 2:49:00 PM

Thank you Charlie.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/22/2018 8:53:00 PM

LOVELY poem--so well-written and moving right through the sad ending, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Janice.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 8/22/2018 2:18:00 AM

Very romantic

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2018 8:19:00 AM

Thank you Debjani.

Pandita Sanchez

Date: 8/21/2018 4:10:00 PM

What a beautiful picture you have painted! Vijay, you just have that special magical touch that turns all you write into beautiful art that sings! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Pandita...appreciate your visit and feedback, as always.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2018 12:34:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, romantic lines and a sad ending combine to lift this poem to captivating poetic heights, Vijay. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2018 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Paul--appreciate the kind words.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/20/2018 11:06:00 PM

Such magical words Vijay...loved it, my friend...best for a win, if for a contest...love & light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2018 7:38:00 AM

Thank you WW..appreciate the kind feedback.

Lyric Man

Date: 8/20/2018 7:41:00 PM

Vijay, this love song that is so outstanding to pull on the universe’s resources and yet so introspective to reveal what’s touching the heart. Your song is brilliantly building to an expected romantic climax.. and then just before. An unexplained goodbye....... wow, I love this for it creativity, for the surprise, and for the anticipation of a sequel or at least an explanation. So awesome!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2018 7:37:00 AM

Many thanks for the kind feedback, LM. Your comments are always uplifting to everyone.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/20/2018 12:12:00 PM

A wonderful, melancholy,romantic write, Vijay! the unexplained loss against a backdrop of nature's glory is all the more heartfelt. Well done !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2018 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Mike.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/20/2018 7:28:00 AM

The beauty of nature's magic is reflected onto the placid sea of romantic hearts which before united they, sadly, break apart! Wondrous writing dear, Vijay! Bravo my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2018 8:30:00 AM

Thank you my friend..I am always delighted by your visit and comments.

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2018 6:26:00 AM

A starry night of "romantic enterprise".. well penned Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2018 6:52:00 AM

Thank you Joseph.

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 8/20/2018 3:30:00 AM

When one leaves, another will come along. Some do return when they realize the love was real. Keep loving Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2018 6:52:00 AM

Appreciate the sentiments..many thanks Vegter.