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Where Have You Gone - Fresh Fluffy Snow

where have you gone fresh fluffy snow glistening over meadows on rooftops in rows where have you gone bracing December air deeply breathed, adored on cheeks ruddy and fair purge the slush from muddy lanes whisk the grime from icy lanes recapture the magic of that first snowfall paint flakes of frost on my windowpane

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Date: 1/11/2022 7:48:00 PM
Fresh snow’s beautiful but it becomes a mess! Very nicely done!
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Date: 1/11/2022 6:19:00 PM
Always an outstanding piece from you. Gershon......Blessings ~Debra
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:03:00 PM
Well, thank you! I am simply trying my best to make a small point with each poem. Blessings, gw
Date: 1/11/2022 4:51:00 PM
Love it, Gershon… but snow belongs in snow domes. In the Uk, one flake lands in a field somewhere… and they cancel all the trains! Sheesh! Terry
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Date: 1/11/2022 6:12:00 PM
Either snow domes or snow cones. ~ Sweets and White Chocolate, gw
Date: 1/11/2022 4:15:00 PM
This is a very lighthearted and fun read; uplifting.
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Date: 1/11/2022 1:09:00 PM
I am ready for the "fresh fluffy snow"- happy to report it will be here on Saturday!
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:22:00 PM
Please!!! Keep it all to yourself. OK?! Chicago's seen enough snow and ice for a whole winter this past week, thank you. Enjoy! :) gw
Date: 1/11/2022 11:14:00 AM
There's some snowy magic in this write. An optimistic glint there in the end about cleaning up the mess and waiting for more. Since you may actually be hoping for warmer weather and plenty of sunshine, I will simply say--May your weather wishes come true! :)
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:56:00 PM
Thanks, P.S... and you're right. It's a bit too nippy for me at this point in Winter. Warmth and Light, Gershon
Date: 1/11/2022 9:26:00 AM
Gershon beauty can only last so long and then it fades....a sad story but a great write! :) Paulette
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:52:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Paulette. Splendor and Glory, Gershon
Date: 1/11/2022 8:12:00 AM
Yeah...it all looks good til day 3 when that dirty five o'clock shadow creeps in.....
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:50:00 PM
So, now I know what to do. I'll get out there with my shaver and get rid of that 'angry stubble.' lol.
Date: 1/11/2022 4:04:00 AM
The melting can be messy, but it soon dies up. We have big snow or ice or combination around every 10 years. It is probably about time for us to have another one. I enjoyed reading this one today.Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:44:00 PM
I'd love for just one winter to see the snow appear for a day, sparkle and shine, and then go back where it came from... I can dream, can't I?! Sara, here's to Inspiration and Transcendence, Gershon

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