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Where Have All the Flowers Gone

Where have all the flowers gone, and sun’s soft smile at break of dawn; moonbeams glowing on the lawn as dusk gives in to sleepy yawn. Life goes by fast, those days have passed, for dreams don’t last, our die was cast. Missing now the gentle breeze that wafted softly through the trees; leaving hearts to feel at ease while passions gently sought to please. Longing for those summer nights when tender feelings felt so right; strolling ‘neath the pale moonlight as beams surrounded with delight. Love comes and goes, and no one knows why love’s sad lows on us impose. Suddenly a dream unknown I found myself there all alone; leaving me without atone, my beautiful sweet bird had flown. By myself I just hang on through dark of night till break of dawn; hiding tears with curtains drawn; O where have all the flowers gone.
November 15, 2019

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Date: 3/24/2020 6:33:00 PM
WOW!
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/25/2020 8:05:00 AM
Thank you, Shirley, I'm glad I was able to WOW you with this piece. John
Date: 12/22/2019 3:18:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem John
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/22/2019 8:27:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory, I appreciate it.
Date: 12/22/2019 2:47:00 PM
Wow John still amazing me! Congrats on your win!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/22/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, Bren, I’m glad I can still amaze you.
Date: 12/11/2019 9:56:00 AM
words from your heart touched mine- beautiful.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/11/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Julie, I appreciate you taking time to read my poetry. I'm pleased that you were touched by my words. John
Date: 11/19/2019 12:40:00 AM
Nice... have you heard the song by The Kingston Trio ... with the same title?
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/19/2019 4:08:00 AM
Thanks, Pashang, I appreciate it. Yes I have heard that song, I think Peter, Paul, and Mary recorded it as well. John
Date: 11/16/2019 8:17:00 AM
poignant yet beautiful with emotions brimming in this one John.... heartfelt and well crafted....hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/16/2019 8:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandy. I actually wrote this poem about 4 months ago, I'm not sure why I didn't post it at the time. I found it the other day going through my poems and thought it was worth sharing. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great weekend. Hugs, John
Date: 11/16/2019 8:07:00 AM
Another romantic gem my friend - your imagination is as fertile as an ever flowing stream running in a valley. However, I sense the sadness within you as I read your poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/16/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts, Jenn. There was a song recorded by Peter, Paul, and Mary back in the 60's by the same name, that title inspired this poem. Sometimes I am able to inject emotions into my poems that I am not really feeling at the time. Since I was able to make you sense a sadness tells me I wrote this poem well. Have a great weekend my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 11/15/2019 8:34:00 PM
In life, moments linger and then they fade away. I am reminded of such, while reading these words from your heart. This is beautiful, yet tender and sad at the same time. We are not promised our next breath. Cherish each moment given. Your thoughts tug deeply at my heart. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/16/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Brandy, I always look forward to hearing from you. Yes, we must cherish these moments and hope they never fade away. Hugs, John
Date: 11/15/2019 6:35:00 PM
Oh John, this emotive piece brought tears to my eyes as it might to anyone who has suffered loss. It is beautifully romantic, mixing the change of season metaphorically with the change in emotions. The melancholy felt with the death of flowers and the death of a relationship. This is a Fave from me my friend. Beyond impressive! : ) xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/16/2019 7:08:00 AM
Thank you so much,Connie, your kind words humble me. I’m glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the fave. Hugs, John
Date: 11/15/2019 7:57:00 AM
So well written, John. Panagiota
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/15/2019 8:05:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota, I appreciate your kind words and visit. John

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