Where Gladiators Fought

Part I

Where gladiators fought for life,
we meet to fight for love
The constellations in the Roman night sky,
celestial spectators, bathe the Colosseum
in the white blood of light
The night is throbbing with the heat of our battle,
our cries, more passionate than any that have gone before

Part II

A short while earlier
A well paid bribe found us in the remains of the Ludus Magnus,
the remains of the old Gladiator School in Rome
where lies buried
a hidden entrance to an underground tunnel 
You pull me with you into dark underground world of legend
By light of a flickering torch,
we travel into the entrails of the behemoth,
coming in time upon the holding rooms
My breath catches 
I hear the sounds of man and beast
carrying through the thin layers of time:
Slaves, criminals, debtors, all awaiting their fate…
Animals pawing, grunting, starved for food
Dying to kill to stave the gnawing pain
Waiting….
Waiting to be lifted up into the arena
Waiting to fight 
Waiting to live or die

Part III

We break into the hypogeum
The crispness of the night air stings us
The vastness of it all paralyzes all thought
Rome comes ALIVE
The resurrection of history enflames us,
and as we mount those final stairs up to the arena,
I feel your excitement blazing through me
Your grasp is almost painful in jubilee
“We are here…HERE!” Your voice is laced with the sacred.
Between those famed arches…XIX and XX
We stand 
You and I all and 50,000 ghost spectators
Here at the East Entrance
The Gate of Life Looms above us
True gladiators passed through these very gates 
Here the applause coursed through their veins
And thundered to the captives below…
Here I stand
Quivering with the knowledge of all this night means to me
That thunder reverberates through MY body
I can hardly breathe
Your eyes are looking up at tiered levels
while mine look ahead
There is the walkway connecting the east to west
At the far side is the Libitinarian, the Gate of Death,
through which dead gladiators were dragged,
their bodies dumped in the Spoliarium 
to be stripped of clothes and armor
Life and death
Here, they converged
Here, they fought
On this night
I know
I will strip myself of my clothing and armor
I will let down my defenses
and give in to your onslaught of passion
Here… I will die to all but your eyes

Part IV

I walk, quietly, with purpose
Here….in this place...
my virgin blood will be spilt
Halfway between life and death, I stop
I turn towards you
My voice reaches you on the night wind
“Come to me!”
I see you move towards me
My mighty gladiator
You who have fought my demons
You who have slain my nightmares
You who have held in check
A savage desire for possession
As you stand before me
I wonder if you know
Tonight is the night
You will plunder and ravage
to your heart's delight
your just reward

Part V

You find a place to keep the torch upright
You see the blanket I’ve spread on the ground
I answer the question in your eyes
With the curve of my lips
I steady my hands as they work to undress me
I feel my body burn in the warmth of your presence
Your eyes undress me faster than my hands can,
and yet... you are....immovable
You stand transfixed
You wait until my only covering
Is my flowing hair
"Make love to me
Here, now...be my gladiator
Come...claim your prize."
I reach out my hand to you
and in a moment
before my next intake of breath
you've come to life and crush me in your arms
Your mouth claims mine
like never before
seeking more
your tongue explores
demanding, commanding
it takes what it will
You pull me in to you 
Your hand in my hair,
my breath is raptured by your sheer strength
Your mouth travels along my neck
Hungry….like a famished animal finally set free to feast
You devour as you reach my cleavage 
I lean back to let you savor my breasts
For the first time
to taste 
You’re down on your knees
your tongue encircling my navel
going round and round and dipping inside
This prophetic dance of what is to come
washes over me
as you lower me to the ground
In a moment, I’m looking at the stars
The two brightest ones being your eyes
You are above me
You are everywhere
Kissing tasting touching feeling pleasing
Finding my voice, I pant...
“Don't...be gentle
not...now!"
I’m gasping with the effort
of all I need to say...
of the weight of feelings...
raging within me
"Don't...hold back anymore
Take me...
Take me...now."

Your hands reach for mine and pin them down
My breasts heave, my body rocks
as I feel you plunging into the moistness 
that your very presence always creates in me
But never...to this luxuriant degree
Pain mixes with pleasure again and again
As I hear your grunt and groan
Your ecstasy comes in manish moan
And I close my eyes to the Roman night sky

I sigh
I die
To the world
I am reborn in you
I hear your victory cry
And feel your jubilant release inside

Part VI

They fought for life
We fought for love
My fingers run through your hair
Your head is pillowed on my breast
My heart beat a reminder
Of what you have won
A gladiator’s reward...

LIFE
found
in the arms
of the woman
you
LOVE


For Justin Bordner’s Contest
Make Love to Me in that Ancient Place
November 16, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 5:58 PM
It seems I was drawn back to this one. It’s hard to believe that almost 4 years has passed since last I read it. I am no less impressed this time. Hugs Rick
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May 5, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Very enjoyable to read again! Hugs Rick.
Khoury Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 9:35 AM
What a combination Eileen? This poem mesmerized me, combining Love with a historical context, with every piece and endeavor by itself. Keep up the good work.
Manassian Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, dear. It was for a contest entitled...Make Love to Me in that Ancient Place. I won first prize! :) I did do research on it. Coming from a history teacher such as yourself, your comment is much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Truly one of your best!
Gist Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:37 PM
This should be a movie, show, play or book because I can see it in action. I love it! It made me want to be the Gladiator! :)
Sergi Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Hi Eileen: I was in awe of your sensuality in the Great arena of Love!
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Thanks ever so much, Ralph! :) I'm so pleased to have your visit. It was a poem that was inspired.....Hugs
Franceschini Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Well I was left breathless wanting that gladiator!! U certainly knew how to separate each act into a written play. also to remind us of the pain that went with the colosseum. Great write!! Bravo
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Thank you, Margaret. I'm so happy that you passed by. I'm happy to say that this poet did get first place in the contest. I did a lot of research for it. It's rather long. I'm amazed that anyone would have enough patience to read it all. :)
Timperley Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Oh WOW! This poem has everything and then some! I could hardly breathe, I was gasping at the end. What a lovely write Eileen. Well done. God Bless. D. 7+7+7 & fav.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:14 PM
Thanks ever so much, Dave. :) That was a very pleasant post to boost my confidence in my writing. It did win first place in the contest, so I'm pleased.
Ross Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 9:10 PM
What an unusual poem, Eileen. Very imaginative. I love the constellations battling with white light. Congratulations!
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Thank you for your knd words, Gawaine. I'm happy this won first place in the contest. I'm a bit unwell. I hope to be around to visit you when I'm doing better. Blessings.
Wigley Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Builds up to a mighty crescendo and sated desire. Last time I was at the Colosseum all I saw were lots of cats. Some people have all the luck. Excellent write, Eileen. Viv x
Johnson Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Sorry to hear you're not feeling well. I too am on the back side of a pretty bad summer cold. Hope you/we feel better soon. :)
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:51 AM
You kind as ever, Viv. Thank you for the visit. I'm not feeling too great at the moment. Hope to catch up when I'm doing better. Hugs
Johnson Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 7:34 PM
I hear Harlequin calling. :) Now I'm going to go splash some cold water on my face. :)
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:55 AM
;) I do enjoy writing stories, Robert. Hope that splash of water helped. I'm not feeling too well at the moment. I hope to catch up with your poetry when I'm feeling better. Thanks for dropping by.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Congratulations on being featured as a ne lifetime member. This one shows what a brilliant writer you are. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:56 AM
Thanks, Rick. I so appreciate the affirmation from you. Hugs
Ginsberg Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Great, reminds me of the series Rome. And you've obviously done your research too!
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Yes, I did do a lot of research on this one, Kate. It was a pleasing experience. I'm glad it won first place in the contest. It is a special piece. I put my heart and soul in it. Thanks for the visit. I'm not doing too well at the moment. Not in a good place. When I'm better, I hope to visit you.
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 1:33 AM
You have an emence amount of talent in that pen WOW FANTASTIC.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Val. I appreciate the visit. I'm not too well at the moment, when I'm feeling better. I hope to be able to visit.
Bocsa Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Sometime,somewhere...the old story that retell in many forms and keys the same immortal feelings that make each person a poet and each poet a person fallen in love>Somewhere,sometimes,or sometime.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Thanks, Ovidiu. Your post is poetry itself. I'm not doing too well at the moment. I hope to visit you when I'm better. Blessings.
Jerden Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Steaming hot,hot,hot! Girl, you have outdone yourself. I never expected to see one like this from you, not that you couldn't write it, but that you published it! Big congrats!
Manassian Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 7:14 PM
Roy....thank you for visiting my poem, Where Gladiators Fought. Your comment is high praise which warms my heart. You haven't visited my work enough to know that I do write many sensual pieces. This isn't even the HOTTEST one of them! ;) Perhaps you'd like to read the Journey of Your Lips. That one is sizzling! Thanks for visiting. :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:29 PM
Huzzah! Congrad's Light & Love
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:56 PM
That was in THE flesh...HA HA! Silly me!
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:50 PM
:) My dear Debbie...in he "flesh"! Aren't you a sweetie pie! HUGS
Callus Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 5:16 PM
Well done Eileen!! Back again with very deserved congratulations!! This was a winner from the start! hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:51 PM
:) I'm glad you think so, Paul. I'm very glad. This win means a great deal to me. Hugs
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:28 PM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! many congrats on your win with this epic write! Hugs jan xx
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Thanks, sweetie. I so appreciate the visit and the congrats. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:23 AM
wow, this is MAGNIFIQUE!!!(is that French, or did I spell it wrong?) I like what John Lawless said to you down here!! BIG congrats. You won a contest in which you are a queen: romantic writing!!
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:54 PM
OH! This coming from ANDREA D!!! I'm touched, honored, and thrilled. Thank you, my dear.
Lawless Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 9:12 AM
You came, you wrote, you conquered. Magnificent, simply magnificent. Congratulations.
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:55 PM
:) Does that make me an empress? Thank you for that this lovely lovely post, John. I'm very happy to receive your congratulations!
Yvonne Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:59 AM
I am back to Congratulate you on your first place win with this epic write.
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:55 PM
And I will receive a second visit with joy!
Breidenthal Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 2:48 AM
Hey, Eileen.....this is...AMAZING. I love every bit of it. WOW! I have no words for this masterpiece. I read most of this poem with my mouth agape...fascinating story, captivating, dangerous, and so so passionate. This is the best poem I have read in a very long time, including a lot of published poetry. Favorited!!! An exceedingly well deserved win from a most talented poet. Hearty congratulations!! Always, Laura
Manassian Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Laura...you are very sweet, my dear. Thank you for your kindness. You had a very powerful entry to this contest. I'm glad that you did so well. I appreciate your visit and the lovely words you've left as a gift. I was thinking first to let the setting for my poem be somewhere close to the pyramids of Egypt, or the temples in Luxur, but Rome won the day in the end. I needed that battling for love to play out. Thanks for the visit. :) Hugs
Kayode Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you on the win Eileen,I am happy this beautiful poem decorates you with gold medal ; have a good day my friend ....huggs
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:11 AM
I'm glad to have your lovely comment! :) I must admit that this poem is one of the ones that actually took some research. I worked hard on it and am so glad that Justin rewarded the hard work. Thanks for the visit.
Carmack Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Congrats on your top placement in the contest. I like the balance in this poem and how you handled every detail.
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:12 AM
Thanks ever so much, Rob. It was a struggle to try to say all I wanted in a shorter form, so I just decided to tell a story and hope that the readers wouldn't lose interest toward the end. I appreciate the visit and kind remarks. :)
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