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Where Frozen Embers Still Burn 2

Quick!!! LISTEN UP GUYS – its no rumour We have a new poet with a sense of humour To miss his latest gem would be a shame Maurice Yvonne is this witty guy’s name A contest entry sadly it wont be But it’s a poem you need to see While frozen embers still burn is his poem you must read If my poem catches your attention I have done a good deed. Jan Allison 28th August 2014

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/28/2014 8:05:00 PM

You're an angel.. God bless you and happy writing. Love and prayers and thank you for the new reading.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 4:01:00 AM

his poem is so funny Regina i had to get more reads for him:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 4:08:00 PM

did i remember to drop by and say thank you. here i am sixty years old sharp as a whip and they say people start to lose their memories. I'm just glad i remembered to stop by and say thanks. bye.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 4:19:00 PM

Maurice Did i tell you you need to read my poem 'the perils of getting older'? Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 4:08:00 PM

did i remember to drop by and say thank you.bye.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 4:18:00 PM

LOL Maurice you need to read my poem'the perils of getting older' hugs Jan xxx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/28/2014 12:25:00 PM

Isn't he though! Good work.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 12:27:00 PM

He's a great humourous writer:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 10:16:00 AM

you know we have to stop meeting like this your husband is going to get suspicious.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 10:19:00 AM

:-) he's married to me he very tolerant LOL :-)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 10:15:00 AM

and then peoples say hemorrhoids are a bad thing. they doesn't know anything he says in his own grammatically incorrect way.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 10:18:00 AM

They are just a pain in the arris :-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 9:50:00 AM

oh sorry one more thing. i love the style and flow of this poem. an excellent write. and the topic matter, wow, out of this world. i mean where do i start. heeheeheehee. love you, maurice.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 9:58:00 AM

LOL go on go on I love comiplments like that LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 9:46:00 AM

wow Jan i am getting so many reads. thanks. again.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 9:57:00 AM

:-) hugs xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 8/28/2014 9:33:00 AM

Came to read you and found another jewel. Thanks for both!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 9:39:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Brenda i just wanted people to read his hilarious poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 9:30:00 AM

you are so sweet. thank you so much Jan. how kind and giving. so selfless. god bless your big huge heart.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 9:39:00 AM

The pleasure is all mine - it would be a tragedy not to see your hilarious poem more well read Maurice:-) I hope you get lots of reads now:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2014 9:16:00 AM

I have read some of his work..I will have to look him up again..Thanks for letting us know about this...Thanks for stopping by..My work about addiction and the divorce..Well don't worry..I haven't gotten that bad yet but sometimes my husband can be jealous of my writing..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 9:26:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Sara:-) My husband actually helps me with my poems now when i ask him for inspiration and am stuck on a few words... so i can't get divorced now! Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/28/2014 8:49:00 AM

Yes Jan Maurice is quite the poet...not sure if I read that one yet..I will head over...hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 8/28/2014 8:55:00 AM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=594799 ....... here is the link to the poem :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 8:55:00 AM

It is simply hilarious - a totally unique take on the theme! Hugs Jan :-) :-)