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Where Did I Go Wrong

Wondering what we said Late last night in bed Woke to a reminder That now I can’t find her Oh where did I go wrong, go wrong, go wrong Oh where did I go wrong, go wrong I go looking for answers All I get is “I can’t sir” Repeating the question They offer suggestions Of where I went wrong, went wrong, went wrong Of where I went wrong, went wrong Then at each gathering There’s more than chattering Of whispers and starring At my lack of caring “How could he?” “Where is she?” “The monster!” “We found her!” Now she’s telling her story With deep allegory Leaving no slight detail Of the ways I failed And where I went wrong, went wrong, went wrong Of where I went wrong, went wrong For Sheri's Rhythm contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 12:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win... Such a great write friend
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:10:00 AM
David, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/13/2015 8:06:00 PM
I enjoyed your lyrical poem... I can almost hear a tune to it !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 2/13/2015 7:50:00 PM
Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2015 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,David, a 7 . Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:01:00 PM
an entertaining write david - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2015 11:43:00 PM
you did GREAT with this one. Congrats. It reminded me of a Dr. Seuss for adults!!!
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:11:00 PM
David, cute poem, enjoyed it, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:51:00 PM
Your poetry is sure entertaining. You have a great style of telling things how they are.
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Date: 1/8/2015 6:36:00 PM
Very good pen David ! Very sad it seems you went wrong for her no matter what you did friend! That's love for you no matter what we do is sometimes wrong! But never lose hope. A 7 from me! I wish you the best in 2015! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and Light! xxx D.
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