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Where Did I Go Wrong

Where did i go wrong if we even did why does it feel like our love has come to an end? why do we not talk or even look into each other's eyes? why is it that every time you speak, i feel as if I want to cry? where did i go wrong i never ment to hurt you in anyway but at times like these when i need you the most it feels like youve runaway as if your afraid to tell me how you really feel where did i go wrong its like we cant even talk or call each other on the phone why is it that i feel like ive hurt you alot trying to fix things between us but just not hitting the right spots where did i go wrong if i ever really did i wish i could go back in time and redo everything i did baby you mean the world to me tell me please where did i go wrong baby tell me tell us all where did i go wrong if i ever really did

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Date: 4/5/2011 6:26:00 AM
Creative and introspective expressions, Jonathan
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:52:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight with it's interesting theme... hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jonathan. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:50:00 PM
the contest you have entered this in is about a cat and raccoon, please check contest again
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