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Where Did I Come From

Shuffling along a painted line Marking dates of measured time A wary way off the path, where wayward footsteps dare to pass Round wires' razor-sharp divide Red-tailed hawks circle long and wide Soul-mates screech; soar above Sets of screams of scolding love In fine feather for first flights fling Around the vacant nest fledglings cling Fostered till autumn's turn Breasts ablaze, brown bands burn On departing wings, black stripes earned Metallic scratching, bird-feet rasping The feeble chirping fades Into dark, watery narrows stray A nestling delivered by the dawn of day "I flew straight again It was the idea of you We found you in a drainpipe darling!"

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Date: 2/19/2016 6:30:00 PM
Starting every line with a capital letter has always been traditional but, never a rule of poetry and never qquestioned until modern poetry shook things up. Now, some maintain a traditional point of veiw, which is that it is the main aspect that sets itself apart from prose and that each line should stand on its own merit and integrity. Thus, it should always be observed with no exceptions. Others say since it is not part of the rules it should not be neccessary to follow tradition.
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Date: 2/18/2016 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for removing the commentary. I appreciate it.
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