Where Darkness Grows

My darkness grows beyond dreary heartache Which consumes me deep inside Where my soul becomes black Russell Sivey

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2011 6:41:00 PM

I hope not but just a write about a topic of depression..Depression rips at a person's soul..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..I am putting pictueres with my work most of the time now..Just click on "About This Poem" to see my additions..I would like to go back and see what I could do with some of my old ones..Thanks again for stopping by..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/21/2011 3:26:00 PM

This touches me somehow, perhaps because I've been there too. The truth in this is uncomfortable and that's what a good verse is supposed to do - make us feel.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/21/2011 9:52:00 AM

Poets as a group tend to deal with the dark side. I can't help being drawn to these kinds of verse. Pehaps I fit in well. Nice one Russ.