James Fraser Poet Quatrain

Where Crows Never Caw

In demonic stare she sighs and writhes
Alluring like honey to take their lives
Attraction so dark, even crows never caw
This Gothic she, beyond the lights law

With out stretched arms invited they be
From the darkest light they come through the trees
The flutter of silk wings in crimsoned red
She pouts her face no fear she dreads

Her followers in accomplish, in taste of blood
Returning to she, now in redded flood
Angels of her dark in skeletal trees they stare
Where crows never caw, for they dare not dare

A new dawn now arises, as she quietly lays
Awaiting the return of the full moons display
Once again she'll sigh and writhe, in demonic stare
For she awaits the light, and the innocents share











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Don Johnson May 15, 2011 at 3:09 PM The Gothic she where crows dare not dare to shiver n shake bite ya fingernails bare sounds like a bad bitch... " to live in west Queensland where bore water is a must...n the crows will pick your eyes out , and chew your flaming guts...hehe I have myself recovered an old pub pool table lotsa staples ...enjoy a game when friends come by... thanks mate Don

C.C Bloomsfield May 14, 2011 at 12:42 AM A strong poem james,i despise anyone who tries to take advantage of the innocent,i do believe for every dark angel,.there's a radiant one..and i do believe that a drop of light in an ocean of darkness can do wonders..and you are full of sunbeams:)..very talented you are dear friend of mine.

Francine Roberts May 13, 2011 at 9:39 PM just great , love the gothic theme of it ( but beware M. M. will probably damn you straight to hell over this one)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 13, 2011 at 6:36 PM Wonderful ..full of suspense and intrigue and mystery.. luv the Gothic setting James.. will check out the web page luv.. thankxx for your lovely comment.. no on will want to leave this place ..this is why my husband insisted on eventually moving here full time.. and he is winning me over .. it is not hard to do.. with the ambiance here ..luv..

Carrie Richards May 13, 2011 at 6:13 PM Wow, James....this is a wonderful poem from you, one of your best, I think! Loved it!

James Ph. Kotsybar May 13, 2011 at 5:50 PM "Sighs and writhes," is certainly a tongue twister. It's fun though, and I found myself practicing it aloud. I think you're missing an apostrophe in line 4. I like the concept of crows not daring to caw. I'm not sure I grasped entirely what/who you are describing, but it is most definitely descriptive and I like the assonance of the piece.