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Where Bridge Ends

It’s curved arc Speaks to me and remarks Of twilight journeys lost and regained Connecting intersections of choices, flesh- drained From whispers by harlots and saints peeling my vein. As rubber skids along twisted bends I pledge to make amends, Where bridge ends Carly Lalion For nette onclaud's Trois Par Huit 13 May 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/31/2014 11:36:00 AM
a stirring work on atonement which really stunned me no end, carly... top-notch cheers on your 1st place win... huggs
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:21:00 AM
Perfect trois par huit. I can see why it's on the throne!
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Date: 5/31/2014 5:11:00 AM
Congrats on thge win with this perfect Trois Par Huit, Carly
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:38:00 PM
Carly, Congratulations, in Nette's "TROIS PAR HUIT A BRIDGE contest." always~ Linda
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:59:00 AM
Way to go with this winning work.Congrats.Sara
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:01:00 PM
Great write - bravo! Congratulations on your awesome win!
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Date: 5/28/2014 1:34:00 PM
congratulations on a well deserved win, there is a sadness in this poem
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