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Where Are You Off To In Such a Hurry

It is a must that I have to rush, And spare not even a second of Time All I touch just turns to dust- Patience...that virtue to find! Amidst the stress so meaningless, The Peace I seek thereafter For my own good I can't obsess, But get lost in all the laughter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 9:44:00 PM
Archaic This is creative and imaginative. Cute and clever. Nice job
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Date: 10/10/2013 12:27:00 PM
Much appreciated, Robin! :)
Date: 8/28/2013 5:34:00 AM
great read loved it... ~V~
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Date: 8/28/2013 5:54:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment, V :)
Date: 8/27/2013 2:51:00 PM
Very clever and witty! Great rhyme flow!...Milt
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Date: 8/28/2013 5:53:00 AM
Thanks for the read and reply, Milt :)

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