Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Where Are You Off To In Such a Hurry

It is a must that I have to rush,
And spare not even a second of Time
All I touch just turns to dust-
Patience...that virtue to find!
Amidst the stress so meaningless,
The Peace I seek thereafter
For my own good I can't obsess,
But get lost in all the laughter

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Robin Davis October 9, 2013 at 9:44 PM Archaic This is creative and imaginative. Cute and clever. Nice job Just That Archaic Poet October 10, 2013 at 12:27 PM Much appreciated, Robin! :)

Vinayak Pratap August 28, 2013 at 5:34 AM great read loved it... ~V~ Just That Archaic Poet August 28, 2013 at 5:54 AM Thank you for the compliment, V :)

Milton Toran August 27, 2013 at 2:51 PM Very clever and witty! Great rhyme flow!...Milt Just That Archaic Poet August 28, 2013 at 5:53 AM Thanks for the read and reply, Milt :)