Marty Owens Poet Rhyme

Where Are You My Dear?

My Dear,
Where have you been hiding for so long?
Were you in the past, singing your sweet love song?

I looked for you in the present.
I missed you in every place you went.

Now I will search for you in the future.
On the plains and highways, then I remember,

You once told me that if you would ever depart,
I would find you in that secret chamber in my heart.




Note: Written for Brian Strands contest "My Dear"

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Audrey Haick December 7, 2009 at 5:48 AM This is awesome, Marty! Sorry, I missed it! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "My Dear...." Contest! This is indeed well-deserved. You are sweet!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 2, 2009 at 8:17 PM Such a sweet and hopeful poem :) it touches the heart--congrats on your win with this one, Marty :)

John Freeman December 2, 2009 at 4:42 PM Awesom win Marty, Sincerely, Moses

Joyce Johnson December 1, 2009 at 6:38 PM Congratulations on a lovely poem and on your win. Love, Joyce

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire December 1, 2009 at 7:59 AM Dear Marty, WOW this is a Great Letter YOU Have written a WellDeserved the 3rd Place Win in Brian's Letter Contest ( My Dear ) Superbly Done Congratulations My POETIC Friend ALWAYS...HG

Raul Moreno November 30, 2009 at 9:52 PM Marty, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Audrey Haick November 29, 2009 at 10:16 PM Simply beautiful, Marty! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "My Dear.." Contest! Marked as one of my favs.! Peace and love, Audrey Thanks for commenting on my poems!

Doris Culverhouse November 28, 2009 at 6:14 PM congrats on 3rd place!!

November 28, 2009 at 4:15 PM Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your third place finish in Brian's contest to my other comment. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 27, 2009 at 11:10 AM Congratulations Marty, on winning in Brian’s “My Dear” writing contest with this wonderful love letter. It's easy to see why you did so well, placing third. Your words are sweet. Smiles, DAS-J

Donna Golden November 26, 2009 at 9:17 AM Lovely, romantic piece, Marty! Congratulations on your big win! Hugs, Donna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 26, 2009 at 8:01 AM Congrats, Marty, on your win in Brian's contest... this was a unique poem and a definite well earned win.. luv.. "Sweetie"

Jessica Arteaga November 26, 2009 at 7:04 AM absolutely love the last line! congrats on your placement in this contest!

Elaine George November 26, 2009 at 5:35 AM Marty! Very heart-felt. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Laine

Brian Strand November 26, 2009 at 1:04 AM Congrats on your success in my contest Marty.Rgds Brian.My latest contest LOVE CAME DOWN is now open.

Doris Culverhouse November 20, 2009 at 4:02 PM nicely penned, hope you find her!!

James Fraser November 20, 2009 at 7:09 AM Nice short letter Marty, i think Brian will enjoy this piece, good luck in his contest >> James

Brian Strand November 18, 2009 at 12:12 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Marty.Rgds Brian

November 17, 2009 at 12:52 PM Sounds like a lasting love to me. The emotion comes through your words. If you entered Brian's contest with this one, good luck. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Travis Flasnick November 17, 2009 at 12:42 PM This is very nice!

Lena Townsend November 17, 2009 at 6:29 AM A beautiful and touching write filled with true emotion. Excellent! Smiles from Lolita

Danny Nunn November 17, 2009 at 6:23 AM Good write Marty...I wrote one similar to this last week, but kind of said it a cowboy's way...glad that you like History...Thanks Danny

Carol Sunshine Brown November 17, 2009 at 6:10 AM Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Marty. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse November 17, 2009 at 5:17 AM beautiful poem, enjoyed reading

Charmaine Chircop November 16, 2009 at 10:21 PM i love the secret chamber of our heart...its original//loved it--Charma:)

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