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Where Are You My Dear?

My Dear, Where have you been hiding for so long? Were you in the past, singing your sweet love song? I looked for you in the present. I missed you in every place you went. Now I will search for you in the future. On the plains and highways, then I remember, You once told me that if you would ever depart, I would find you in that secret chamber in my heart. Note: Written for Brian Strands contest "My Dear"

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Date: 12/7/2009 5:48:00 AM
This is awesome, Marty! Sorry, I missed it! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "My Dear...." Contest! This is indeed well-deserved. You are sweet!
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Date: 12/2/2009 8:17:00 PM
Such a sweet and hopeful poem :) it touches the heart--congrats on your win with this one, Marty :)
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:42:00 PM
Awesom win Marty, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2009 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely poem and on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2009 7:59:00 AM
Dear Marty, WOW this is a Great Letter YOU Have written a WellDeserved the 3rd Place Win in Brian's Letter Contest ( My Dear ) Superbly Done Congratulations My POETIC Friend ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:52:00 PM
Marty, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
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Date: 11/29/2009 10:16:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Marty! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "My Dear.." Contest! Marked as one of my favs.! Peace and love, Audrey Thanks for commenting on my poems!
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Date: 11/28/2009 6:14:00 PM
congrats on 3rd place!!
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Date: 11/28/2009 4:15:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your third place finish in Brian's contest to my other comment. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/27/2009 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations Marty, on winning in Brian’s “My Dear” writing contest with this wonderful love letter. It's easy to see why you did so well, placing third. Your words are sweet. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 11/26/2009 9:17:00 AM
Lovely, romantic piece, Marty! Congratulations on your big win! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/26/2009 8:01:00 AM
Congrats, Marty, on your win in Brian's contest... this was a unique poem and a definite well earned win.. luv.. "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/26/2009 7:04:00 AM
absolutely love the last line! congrats on your placement in this contest!
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Date: 11/26/2009 5:35:00 AM
Marty! Very heart-felt. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Laine
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Date: 11/26/2009 1:04:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Marty.Rgds Brian.My latest contest LOVE CAME DOWN is now open.
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Date: 11/20/2009 4:02:00 PM
nicely penned, hope you find her!!
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Date: 11/20/2009 7:09:00 AM
Nice short letter Marty, i think Brian will enjoy this piece, good luck in his contest >> James
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Date: 11/18/2009 12:12:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Marty.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/17/2009 12:52:00 PM
Sounds like a lasting love to me. The emotion comes through your words. If you entered Brian's contest with this one, good luck. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 11/17/2009 12:42:00 PM
This is very nice!
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:29:00 AM
A beautiful and touching write filled with true emotion. Excellent! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:23:00 AM
Good write Marty...I wrote one similar to this last week, but kind of said it a cowboy's way...glad that you like History...Thanks Danny
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:10:00 AM
Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Marty. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2009 5:17:00 AM
beautiful poem, enjoyed reading
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:21:00 PM
i love the secret chamber of our heart...its original//loved it--Charma:)
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