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For contest sponsored by Tom Woody: Paul Gauguin painting, where do we come from? what are we? where are we going?
I am resigned. I was once full of neoteric life, fresh as morning dew. Blank as a hardened sponge waiting for that morning, to soak in all this life. I was curious and surprised by the innocence of young creatures. Playful, and distracted by all the colors, flavors, scents, sounds, and textures whirling around me. I was but one drop of water yet presumed myself the storm. I was then full of new life within my growing awareness. I was the life giver. The female womb, ripe as fruit from the tree. The planting of which was forbidden but irresistible in its passion and pleasure. Life and death growing inside me. I was then blind sided by reality, by my insignificant self. I lost the morning dew, I lost the fevered curiosity, I lost the ego. I was left with cold questions and fear. Knowing myself to be corruptible. I became the seeker, the hunter, the collector of truth. The water dried up, hardened the sponge once again with no more mist or dew to soak in. It was not for me. The colors no longer distract. The flavors have lost their savor. No perfume in this decaying stillness. I am deaf to their noises, and they shrink from my touch. I am resigned to listen to my own thoughts… of what is to come. I am resigned.

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Date: 7/8/2024 9:51:00 PM
amazing write, congratulations dear poet. Happy writing.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/9/2024 12:51:00 AM
Well thank you thriveni! I'm honored to have placed! I'm get to reading all other entries soon! Xo
Date: 7/8/2024 7:34:00 PM
I had no idea this gem was yours Crys. You took us from beginning to end and we saw a life in brief. In the end - resignation with death in view. Reality for so many
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/9/2024 12:50:00 AM
Hey that's great, I'm so honored to place in your contest! Thank you for such a unique one with the painting...I so enjoyed researching this and getting opinions of how to interpret Gaugain's art work. The painting was amazingly complex(to me) and after trying to write from several of the characters perspectives, I found the elderly woman had the most to say. Thanks again Tom!
Date: 7/2/2024 9:28:00 AM
Great descriptive writing. It feels a bit sad to me to only feel resigned. I guess I have been hearing about too many NDE stories!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/2/2024 12:23:00 PM
It is sad... but the elderly woman in the painting does seem resigned and sad I think. Would love to tell her those stories! I'm happy to hear your good judgments on my writing! I do so enjoy your own!Ty for commenting! Xo
Date: 7/2/2024 1:37:00 AM
Dear Crystol, Sometimes we find peace and answers through being resigned! Being deaf to meaningless white noise and all those that drain us is the best way to go forward. In life we learn and realise so much, having seen as time goes by etc. i really felt the lines “The colors no longer distract. The flavors have lost their savor. No perfume in this decaying stillness. ” brilliant and soul hitting! Powerful write it is! Pleasure reading your work. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/2/2024 12:25:00 PM
Oh wow, thank you! I treasure your compliments as I am a big fan of your writing. I'm a simplistic writer I think, not nearly as deep as some wonderful writers I love here on ps. But we all offer it unique selves. Ty for commenting! Xo
Date: 7/1/2024 7:50:00 PM
seems you have let go of mundane things and allow God to.be in control...finely written with an intimate look at one's self...blessings, crystol
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/2/2024 12:27:00 PM
I wonder if the woman in the painting would be a resigned to death of she understood the new life awaiting her. Ty for the compliments on my writing! That means so much from those I admire. Xo

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