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Whenever I, Do Remember You

Whenever I... do remember you Whenever I... do remember you... I feel..a tender warmth, consoling my pain, as, your compassionate heart was what rescued me... from the bane, of my fractured state. Shine on, dear one! Whenever I... do remember you... unsurpassed joy... washes over me, like a tidal wave, vanquishing my sorrow, and, refreshing my aching soul. Shine on, dear one! Whenever I... do remember you... a placid peace, overwhelms my mind, supplanting charcoal skies, with resplendent beaming rays, from your shining eyes. Shine on, dear one! Whenever I... do remember you... I come alive, resurrected by, the fragrance of your love, I am revived, by inhaling, perfumed memories of our... amour sans fin. Shine on, dear one! John Derek Hamilton April 24,2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2018 1:25:00 PM

This haunting poem is very beautiful, John. Another one of your best writes.

John Hamilton
Date: 5/8/2018 9:17:00 AM

Wow, thanks Andrea, that's a big compliment, I appreciate your sentiments on this write!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/3/2018 4:59:00 AM

You takes us on a journey of love John..awesome poetry.

John Hamilton
Date: 5/3/2018 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Harry, you always have such warm words of encouragement that spurs me onward. Take care!

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/2/2018 7:16:00 PM

An endless love, indeed! I love the graceful melody of your melancholic poem, John. It is so genuine in the poignant emotional reverie of someone you hold so dear to your heart and soul. Your rhythmic lines, wondrous metaphors and lovely refrain combine to create a beautiful poetic experience.. Your imagery reminds me of someone who may have passed on.. 'supplanting charcoal skies with resplendent beaming rays from your shining eyes. Shine on, dear one! So blissful! Warmest wishes, my friend..

Susan Ashley
Date: 5/3/2018 8:57:00 PM

I'm sorry for your loss, John. Your poem speaks of a great love. How fortunate are you that you have experienced this in your life and now have such beautiful memories to 'vanquish your sorrow and refresh your aching soul' - enduring and endless love indeed!

John Hamilton
Date: 5/3/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thanks Susan, I do enjoy your friendly visits and words of encouragement, so glad you enjoyed this piece, and your interpretation is spot on! Have a great day!

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 4/30/2018 1:12:00 PM

hmmm, v.interesting. This kind of reminds me of a lot of things...dare I go there. Anyhow, flipping on John Lennon now, which gives me an idea, now that's dangerous.

John Hamilton
Date: 5/1/2018 2:28:00 PM

Thanks Leanne, your comments are as intriguing as your poems, now you've got me thinking...hmmm v interesting, I always get a little worried when I hear interesting...just tell me what's on your mind I can take it! lol!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 4/29/2018 3:21:00 PM

And this poem shall "shine on" as well! I love to check out your non-Lyric works, because most could be songs of their own, as you are such a master of rhythm and flow ... this is so tender and romantic, and lush with its melancholy poignancy and charm. Just adore this one, John - superb!

John Hamilton
Date: 4/30/2018 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Greg, funny how you mention this could be a song, I was going to do it as a lyric but decided to go with a refrain instead, which gives it a melodic feel, thanks for the nice visit!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/26/2018 10:50:00 AM

Hi John, an excellent piece of gold comes from your pen. Your words touch the heart so gently and such wonderful visions do touch the mind. I am glad i dropped by today. Wonderful poetry as always John. This one has to go into my faves. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend....Mike.

John Hamilton
Date: 4/27/2018 11:05:00 AM

Thanks Mike for your always kind and generous comments, it is very much appreciated!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/24/2018 2:14:00 PM

adorable; you concoct lovely metaphoric wonder, john... huggs

John Hamilton
Date: 4/27/2018 11:06:00 AM

Thanks Nette for your kind words, I do appreciate your visit!