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When You're On the Outside of the Abstract

empty space in chest filled with longing and unrest the rain understands

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/30/2023 8:57:00 AM

Rain is cleansing, rain gives downtime. I liked this poem. Many are on the outside, looking in.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/30/2023 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Hilda - it's tricky when a feeling descends and you don't know why. Usually tiredness!

Paul Willason

Date: 10/30/2023 4:47:00 AM

Quite a profound little gem ...connected to this as it is raining at the moment.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/30/2023 4:52:00 AM

I've woke up in a right mood Paul and just trying to channel it somewhere... It's raining here too and the window panes look ever so sorrowful due the the wind direction. Hopefully the wind will change direction and I'll perk up too! Thanks for your comment, always valued as you know

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/30/2023 3:25:00 AM

love it. God bless you and thanks, love, Gina

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/30/2023 4:53:00 AM

Thank you Gina, glad it landed well for you. I appreciate your comment x