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When Young, Write Them Sexy and Hot

When Young, Write Them Sexy and Hot Heal me I am bleeding, losing my love that is so true Heal me I am bleeding, ever slipping far away from you Adore me as you once love struck and faithfully did taste me as your heart needs my blood to renew Touch me I am needing, your heart to wed mine again Touch me I am needing , your true love without end Lay me in your soft bed to please gently this night slay my doubts , love me as your lover and a friend Pleasure me I am awaiting, your needs and sweet delights Pleasure me I am awaiting, your wet kisses all these nights undress me slowly as you hold back your delicious moans eat my love as you are my princess on our private flights Love me I am hungry, for your sexy curves, hips and lips Love me I am hungry, for your hottest sexual fantasy trips Send me on a lust filled journey into your greatest treasure Soothe me until my satisfaction explodes, burst or rips Teach me I am willing, to explore your exquisite private places Teach me I am willing, to drive your pleasure until time erases all thoughts except rose-bursts into your sweet red-hot flower tasting your heavenly sexual delights leaving white love traces.... Robert L. , rewritten 05-11-2014

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Date: 5/27/2014 1:19:00 PM
steammmmy and I love it Robert a fine win. hugs Jan xxxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2014 1:41:00 PM
Its tame by some things I've read on here recently Robert - If people don't lie what we write they should simply stop reading it - simples! Hugs Jan xxx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/27/2014 1:30:00 PM
Thanks my friend for the kind congrats.. I had hesitated posting it for public viewing but decided why not? If it bombs no harm no foul...
Date: 5/27/2014 1:51:00 AM
MANY CONGRAT''S ON YOUR WELL DESERVED WIN WITH THIS WONDERFUL POEM ROBERT. LAINIE
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/27/2014 7:36:00 AM
I thank you kindly for the congrats ..
Date: 5/26/2014 10:33:00 PM
your welcome...Soup Mail
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:54:00 PM
Hi, ROBERT, Congratulations, thank you for the support. Enjoy my blog "Four Letter Words." if you like or have the time.. ((THIS IS A SWEET POEM ON LOVE)) Good night.... XOX~ LINDA
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/26/2014 10:30:00 PM
Thanks my friend. It surely was the most intimately revealing write that I've ever presented for public viewing.
Date: 5/12/2014 6:01:00 PM
lol, well, now, Robert, you can be my fantasy lover any time :) Too much!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/12/2014 8:13:00 PM
Even if we do it at a slower pace and with more deliberate delicacy.. lol
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/12/2014 8:11:00 PM
Thanks my friend. We older guys still remember how to shoot out the lights and howl at the moon. E
Date: 5/12/2014 12:02:00 PM
Woo I think I need a cold shower now! What a steamy sexy poem. Well done, you got my mind dancing to a seductive tone. well done
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/27/2014 6:51:00 AM
hey I'm back again to say grats on your third place in PD's contest. Way to go Robert :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/12/2014 8:10:00 PM
Thanks. . As the write presents I dealt in pure raw emotion a lot back then. It was heaven while it lasted but I still lost that fine lady! Alas, a roving eye and quick on action got me in trouble many more times in the future from the time of that relationship.
Date: 5/12/2014 9:40:00 AM
OHHH Robert... this is hot..lol..hot... love it.. hugs
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/12/2014 10:25:00 AM
I saw that.. thank you for visiting.. and Your poem is excellent.. hugs xxx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/12/2014 10:22:00 AM
Many thanks my friend. Loved your latest offering that I commented on! That was a rewrite from one I composed many decades ago. Not 100% but really close to the original.
Date: 5/12/2014 8:39:00 AM
Have edited this morning. A few minor improvements..
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Date: 5/11/2014 10:29:00 PM
Even though I have not seen the original, this version beautifully reflects the highest level of intimate loving!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/11/2014 10:39:00 PM
I thank you again. Quite likely the original was a better version. I had a much younger brain back then. Still I found this to be good enough to offer. Glad you like it..
Date: 5/11/2014 10:08:00 PM
What a powerful tribute to loving sensuality expressed in poetry. Robert, this is just emotionally moving and beautiful!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/11/2014 10:18:00 PM
Thanks for commenting. I have rarely ever let even a close friend view such private exchanges I had with my lady friends in my youth. This was rewritten from memory decades old. Not sure if the original is better. I am indeed happy that you found it pleasing!
Date: 5/11/2014 9:31:00 PM
This is my first time to publicly present what previously I had only privately offered to a lover. Much of it coming from memory of a poem I sent decades ago. Simply can not remember if this or the previous one was better.
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