Eileen Manassian Poet Free verse

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When You Say My Name

You wrap my name
In syllables of love
Passion tinged sound units
Caressed by the beauty of your voice
you leave me no choice
but to yield....

breathed into my ear
you release
letter sojourners to travel
down the curve of my neck
to a cadence that captivates
and my heart capitulates
When you say my name....

When you say my name
saturated in n~e~e~d
wanting to be freed....
you make the appeal
wanting healing...immediate...real
your testosterone tempered tonality
temptingly deep...
it sets in motion
Resonance reverberations
that rock ecstasy's epicenter...
my name comes again
riding your waves of want...
it comes
in the full knowledge
that my release of liquid love
will welcome you in
to the inner sanctum sanctuary
where your body is idolized
and your name chanted...immortalized
in the rhythm and rhyme
of passion sublime
When you say my name...

When you say my name
you evoke the spirit of eternity
to dance the dance of life
weaving through and around
two simple syllables
of romantic antics
dancing and swaying
your voice calming playing
the trace of romance
leaving nothing to chance
when you say my name....

when YOU say...MY...N*A*M*E*

Eileen

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Richard Lamoureux June 4, 2015 at 9:19 AM I am pleased this one is in the top 100 Eileen! Hugs Rick.

Poet Tacito May 14, 2015 at 3:09 PM How it's felt, more than how it's simply said. Verbalize the trials that hold judgments on our tomorrow. I wrap these vowels amongst your conjugated kiss. French. Dips. Say my name, no. Remember my name... ;-) Absolute kicking lines, Jade/Eileen/Awesome Lady. :D

Kp Nunez May 13, 2015 at 12:38 PM whoa...you're back to your mastered niche! I like the "testosterone tempered tonality" :-). Between you and FJ, the temperature in PS halls should never go below the warm level...A hot 7! Hugs! Kim :-)

Emile Pinet May 11, 2015 at 10:04 AM Your words paint the scene with descriptive words that bring the essence of your experience into our conscious mind and we can walk in your shoes for a short time and feel what you feel. Emile.

Richard Lamoureux May 11, 2015 at 8:44 AM Great comments Eileen!

Arthur Vaso May 11, 2015 at 12:06 AM Loved this, and I guess this is a good time to say, you will always be "Eileen" to me, for some reason this name just so matches to who you are, no offense meant to poor Jade! LOL

Laura Breidenthal May 10, 2015 at 7:59 PM "When you say my name you evoke the spirit of eternity to dance the dance of life" What I really love about this poem is it is not just the physical - the sensuality wraps around father down than just the neck, but straight around the soul and into the soul...Brilliant.. always intense and exciting! Always, Laura

Shane Cooper May 10, 2015 at 6:27 PM Now you have returned. All of the joy and ecstasy of your poetry so sweet so inflamed with passion, carrying us along in the malestrom of your words. dear poetess i have so missed your sublime writing. love Shane xxx

David Meade May 10, 2015 at 11:25 AM Awesome -- and I know you have a lot of names!! Liquid love -- wow, boy howdy!! I am dancing around the room . . . yelling your names . . . OK, OK . . . sitting down. . . well written, good flow, has a sweet taste of honey . . . OK -- it was fantastic! 7, fav Eileen Manassian May 10, 2015 at 11:34 AM Are you done your jig now??? ;) Boy Howdy....love to hear that Texan phrase from Coach. Yes, I do have many names.....I was thinking about it the other day. They all have special meaning to me. LO....a dear sweet one, David. ;) Loved your comment to me on the Storm...soft hands, eh? Nivea....!!! Love honey. Had half an avocado today drenched and honey with almonds all around. That's why we do it round here. ;) Miss ya. I'm doing some corrections...Will my life ever get back to NORMAL? Hugs

Richard Lamoureux May 10, 2015 at 9:32 AM Ooooooh la la. This is hot Eileen! So good to see you back writing. Eileen Manassian May 10, 2015 at 10:24 AM Got my OOOOOHHHH LA LA from Mr Lamoureux. I'm happy as pie! ;) Hugs

Constance La France May 10, 2015 at 8:15 AM Jade, oh this is magical, so soothing and captivating, I just flowed along 7, and thanks so much for visiting my poem, I am... Eileen Manassian May 10, 2015 at 10:25 AM Broken Wings...thank YOU for that lovely post. I'm very touched. Hugs

Jan Allison May 10, 2015 at 7:55 AM EILLLEEEENN I say your name - a beautiful passionate write - love the alliteration and the flow of the words - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx Eileen Manassian May 10, 2015 at 10:26 AM JAN.....aren't you a sweetie pie! Thanks...you took me high...in the sky and you KNOW why! Got to say BYE BYE! ;) Horrid day of corrections. I'm DYING!

Nandita Das May 10, 2015 at 4:14 AM What a magical spell you weave with your words !!! You have a poet's deep passionate heart and words flow so beautifully in poetic rhythm, captivating us with this great beauty of a write A 7.. Eileen Manassian May 10, 2015 at 10:27 AM Magical spell? Aren't you so sweet, Nan! :) I'm glowing. Thank you, dear. I'll be by to visit you...Hugs