Eileen Manassian Poet Sonnet

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When You Make Love To Me

When you make love to me with spoken word
Emblazoned body burns in ecstasy 
Desire’s cadence by my heart is heard
And secret wants demand supremacy

When you make love to me with wanton gaze
A melody of moistness throbs within 
Your gnawing glances do ignite the craze
Of body burning bright in sultry spin

When you make love to me with mute caress
Your hand usurps the moon and draws the flow
Of inner tides that rush in to posses
Your lips and mouth, a quenching to bestow

When you make love to me you set her free
Seductive Mistress of your fantasy

Jade

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Shane Cooper April 13, 2015 at 6:37 AM Hi again my Enchantress, I have had to visit this write again and it gets more impressive each time I read it. Absolutely magnificent write, every word perfectly placed. If it was a painting it would put Piccaso to shame. If you have not guessed I am enamoured of the piece. love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper April 6, 2015 at 9:13 AM Sublime words from a passionate poetess. You ignite ones heart with such desire and need. I think that this is the best work of yours I have read, it is a masterclass in poetry. Love Shane xxx Eileen Manassian April 7, 2015 at 9:21 AM Shane!! I've been searching for this post forever!! Thanks for visiting this piece. :) I don't know if this is the best I've ever written on sensuality. Give Make Love to Me a read. That's also passionate. Thank you for your kindness to me. It's always appreciate and always lights a candle in my heart. :) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux April 5, 2015 at 9:56 AM You are inspired! On to the next one! Eileen Manassian April 5, 2015 at 11:48 AM :) I wrote this a few days ago, but didn't post. Didn't think it appropriate, but....I let it loose today. :) Glad you read them all. Hugs, Richard.

Casarah Nance April 5, 2015 at 3:25 AM Hot, Hot, Hot, the queen of passion writes with a gorgeous pen tonight ;) love it! Eileen Manassian April 5, 2015 at 5:10 AM Hey, Sweetie!!!! I'm riding high this wave of passion!!! Thanks for the visit and the sweetness of your words. Hugs

David Meade April 4, 2015 at 9:44 PM You made me smile tonight LO, your passion melts a hard heart!! Hope you have a blessed and wonderful Easter! Hugs! 7 Eileen Manassian April 4, 2015 at 11:23 PM :) Hey, David....So glad you're here. I've missed reading you. :( I hope you find inspiration to write again. Do I have to push you to collaborate to get you to write??? ;) Waiting....Hugs, LO

Jan Allison April 4, 2015 at 7:13 PM such a stunning sensual write Eileen - You truly are the Queen of passion my friend:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Eileen Manassian April 4, 2015 at 11:29 PM It is a title that I adore and love, Jan. :) Thank you for reminding me. I've been called that by others. Richard wrote a poem about me: Queen of the Romantic Pen. :) Passion and romance....are intertwined. Thanks for the visit, Dear.

Richard D Seal April 4, 2015 at 6:10 PM You never cease to amaze my little Desert Orchid, Ooooo don't play with my fantasies lol, if there was no name on this poem i'd know who wrote it. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian April 4, 2015 at 11:32 PM Well, if it isn't Mr Seal come to tease! Hmmmmm....must Auntie give you a slap on the wrist for that comment??? I'll go easy on you since you haven't been around for a long time. I'm glad you know my writes, Mr Seal. I do have some on different themes. I've just written one on Brutality....Dark...dark. However, passion does reign supreme. Hope you are well...Oh...and thank you for your gracious visit. It's high time you made amends for being delinquent.