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When You Are In Love

When you are in love When you captured my sight I heard a song Evoking a symphony of feelings quite strong As cadence of quest reached deep in my heart Urging in your embrace for the music to start. We exchanged affection without a spoken word Falling in love imminently as emotions stirred, When rhythm of hearts made a passionate claim As your mature frame seduced my budding flame. Though you warned me with an adorable plea I never considered age when I set myself free, For you adorned me with a grace of sapience Comforting in intellect derived from experience. And you bestowed upon me a life of relevance Ornate in the virtues of brilliant significance, Treating me like a queen of ardent dream, Adoring me as if I'm the source of your gleam. When we encountered a hint of dissonance You rallied to my aid to console my innocence, As maven hands ably shaped our relationship Reveling how amicably you steered our ship. First time we met, I knew we were meant to be, Since then it has been a life full of joyous spree, For age doesn't matter when love writes the lyric As passion resonates sound of angelic music. December 11, 2017 Age doesn't matter when you're in love Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver First Place

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Date: 8/5/2022 6:56:00 AM
"your mature frame seduced my budding flame"..... Age is never a barrier in love! Maturity, steadfastness in love and strength of character.... they are the qualities in a man that appeal to a woman ! As ever you have written a paean on love ..in your inimitable style....
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Date: 12/22/2017 5:58:00 AM
A big CONGRATULATIONS Vijay! Best forever wishes, Mick
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Mick.
Date: 12/18/2017 9:09:00 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your awesome win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 12/18/2017 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 12/18/2017 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay :) hugs!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Maureen.
Date: 12/18/2017 12:34:00 PM
Hi Vijay, You've penned a beautiful and romantic write. Congrats on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 12/18/2017 10:19:00 AM
Great write and win Vijay......Congrats
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 12/18/2017 8:34:00 AM
Vijay, You've created an apt tone for Julie's challenging theme, and use wonderful rhyme to deliver a relevant lesson. Nothing to criticize about this delightful piece. I admire it. Dave
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Dave--appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/17/2017 6:44:00 PM
This is such a nice poem to read, great stuff, good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2017 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Lewis.
Date: 12/12/2017 7:26:00 PM
Yes that is true, love trumps everything else. Great piece, good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 8:26:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 12/12/2017 10:46:00 AM
Your words are those of comfort,,this is an amazing poem...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 11:40:00 AM
Thank you harry--I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 12/12/2017 9:30:00 AM
This is beautiful, Vijay, a very sweet sentiment !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Mike--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/12/2017 8:43:00 AM
This is really good, Vijay. It's true, love has no age limitations. I love how you've expressed this!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Becca--appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/12/2017 5:06:00 AM
Vijay! This is so sweet! Love it. A winner.
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Date: 12/12/2017 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 12/11/2017 8:20:00 PM
A beautifully expressed and wonderfully rhymed poem Vijay. An alluring and captivating write of your usual high standards. Best wishes for a win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 5:49:00 AM
You always take the time to write a kind note--many thanks for your sentiments, Susan.
Date: 12/11/2017 5:37:00 PM
Who the cap fits let them wear it...An old bull must be strong to perform like if he was young...Best of luck Vijay...Enjoyed it
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Date: 12/12/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Arturo--appreciate the sentiments.
Date: 12/11/2017 12:38:00 PM
Terrific offering Vijay
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Date: 12/12/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Tim.
Date: 12/11/2017 11:19:00 AM
Wonderful penning Vijay! My best to you in the contest :) xomo!
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Date: 12/12/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Maureen.
Date: 12/11/2017 7:34:00 AM
When in Love we become poets! You my friend, Vijay, being a poet already you have masterfully created a wondrous poem of love! Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend--appreciate your sentiments.
Date: 12/11/2017 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Well done, so expressive and touching. All the best ... CayCay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thanks for the visit CayCay..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/11/2017 7:26:00 AM
Great rhyming throughout Vijay. A wonderful poem that should win you another contest. Good luck my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thank you James..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/11/2017 6:21:00 AM
Smoothly written with excellent rhyming Vijay. Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..appreciate your comments.

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