Vijay Pandit Poet Quatrain

When You Are In Love

When you are in love

When you captured my sight I heard a song
Evoking a symphony of feelings quite strong
As cadence of quest reached deep in my heart
Urging in your embrace for the music to start.

We exchanged affection without a spoken word
Falling in love imminently as emotions stirred,
When rhythm of hearts made a passionate claim
As your mature frame seduced my budding flame.

Though you warned me with an adorable plea
I never considered age when I set myself free,
For you adorned me with a grace of sapience
Comforting in intellect derived from experience.

And you bestowed upon me a life of relevance
Ornate in the virtues of brilliant significance,
Treating me like a queen of ardent dream,
Adoring me as if I'm the source of your gleam.

When we encountered a hint of dissonance
You rallied to my aid to console my innocence,
As maven hands ably shaped our relationship
Reveling how amicably you steered our ship.

First time we met, I knew we were meant to be,
Since then it has been a life full of joyous spree,
For age doesn't matter when love writes the lyric
As passion resonates sound of angelic music. 

December 11, 2017
Age doesn't matter when you're in love
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver
First Place

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Valsa George August 5, 2022 at 6:56 AM "your mature frame seduced my budding flame"..... Age is never a barrier in love! Maturity, steadfastness in love and strength of character.... they are the qualities in a man that appeal to a woman ! As ever you have written a paean on love ..in your inimitable style....

Mick Talbot December 22, 2017 at 5:58 AM A big CONGRATULATIONS Vijay! Best forever wishes, Mick Vijay Pandit December 22, 2017 at 6:44 AM Thank you Mick.

Eve Roper December 18, 2017 at 9:09 PM Vijay, congratulations on your awesome win! Vijay Pandit December 22, 2017 at 6:44 AM Thank you Eve.

Rhoda Tripp December 18, 2017 at 7:58 PM Congratulations, Vijay! Vijay Pandit December 22, 2017 at 6:44 AM Thank you Rhoda.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 18, 2017 at 12:50 PM Congratulations Vijay :) hugs! Vijay Pandit December 18, 2017 at 1:03 PM Thank you Maureen.

Alexis Y. December 18, 2017 at 12:34 PM Hi Vijay, You've penned a beautiful and romantic write. Congrats on your 1st place win:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit December 18, 2017 at 1:04 PM Thank you Alexis.

Joseph May December 18, 2017 at 10:19 AM Great write and win Vijay......Congrats Vijay Pandit December 18, 2017 at 1:03 PM Thank you Joseph.

David Bose December 18, 2017 at 8:34 AM Vijay, You've created an apt tone for Julie's challenging theme, and use wonderful rhyme to deliver a relevant lesson. Nothing to criticize about this delightful piece. I admire it. Dave Vijay Pandit December 18, 2017 at 9:16 AM Thank you Dave--appreciate your visit and comments.

Lewis Raynes December 17, 2017 at 6:44 PM This is such a nice poem to read, great stuff, good luck in the contest :) Vijay Pandit December 17, 2017 at 6:58 PM Thank you Lewis.

Richard Lamoureux December 12, 2017 at 7:26 PM Yes that is true, love trumps everything else. Great piece, good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 8:26 PM Thank you Richard.

Harry Horsman December 12, 2017 at 10:46 AM Your words are those of comfort,,this is an amazing poem... Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 11:40 AM Thank you harry--I appreciate your kind comments.

Mike Gentile December 12, 2017 at 9:30 AM This is beautiful, Vijay, a very sweet sentiment !! Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 9:34 AM Thank you Mike--appreciate your comments.

Becca Teagan December 12, 2017 at 8:43 AM This is really good, Vijay. It's true, love has no age limitations. I love how you've expressed this! Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 9:33 AM Thank you Becca--appreciate your visit and comments.

Rhoda Tripp December 12, 2017 at 5:06 AM Vijay! This is so sweet! Love it. A winner. Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 5:50 AM Thank you Rhoda.

Susan Ashley December 11, 2017 at 8:20 PM A beautifully expressed and wonderfully rhymed poem Vijay. An alluring and captivating write of your usual high standards. Best wishes for a win! Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 5:49 AM You always take the time to write a kind note--many thanks for your sentiments, Susan.

Arturo Michael December 11, 2017 at 5:37 PM Who the cap fits let them wear it...An old bull must be strong to perform like if he was young...Best of luck Vijay...Enjoyed it Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 5:48 AM Thank you Arturo--appreciate the sentiments.

Tim Smith December 11, 2017 at 12:38 PM Terrific offering Vijay Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 5:47 AM Thank you Tim.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 11, 2017 at 11:19 AM Wonderful penning Vijay! My best to you in the contest :) xomo! Vijay Pandit December 12, 2017 at 5:47 AM Thank you Maureen.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 11, 2017 at 7:34 AM When in Love we become poets! You my friend, Vijay, being a poet already you have masterfully created a wondrous poem of love! Congratulations! Vijay Pandit December 11, 2017 at 11:01 AM Thank you my friend--appreciate your sentiments.

CayCay Godwin December 11, 2017 at 7:29 AM Beautiful poem. Well done, so expressive and touching. All the best ... CayCay Vijay Pandit December 11, 2017 at 11:01 AM Thanks for the visit CayCay..appreciate your comments.

James Swartz December 11, 2017 at 7:26 AM Great rhyming throughout Vijay. A wonderful poem that should win you another contest. Good luck my friend! Vijay Pandit December 11, 2017 at 11:00 AM Thank you James..appreciate your comments.

Heidi Sands December 11, 2017 at 6:21 AM Smoothly written with excellent rhyming Vijay. Good luck in the contest :) Vijay Pandit December 11, 2017 at 11:00 AM Thank you Heidi..appreciate your comments.