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~When You Are In Love~ (Dedicated to a good friend of mine) Some many people say that love, Can mend a broken heart, And too many things I know, Are breaking now yours apart True love can make you so happy, But sometimes, all the opposite of that you know, Then love can make you feel so funny and blue, That's when all over again your feelings are so low! Love can make you or break you, Love can be so wonderful, that also it's true, There's a big difference between these two, True love will never forsake or leave you When you feel that love in your heart, you know, Make it every part of your life and don't let it go! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 January,14,2015

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Date: 1/15/2015 8:31:00 AM
Enjoyable read, Dorian. You stay by your friend with words of encouragement. Sometimes we think that we have found true love, then, when it flounders pain takes over. True love is special, and it needs special care! hugs // paul
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:53:00 AM
I really liked this, the fist stanza rocks! Love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/14/2015 4:29:00 PM
Beautiful poem Dorian I especially adore the final couplet:-) Hugs jan xx
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