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When We Were Young

cute, contagious smiles, belly aching, echoed laughs. dirt made the best cakes. sand made love to tiny feet ~ memories held on for life. 07 August 2022 'Childhood Nostalgia' Poetry Contest Sponsored by JCB Brul 57577 syllable count

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Date: 8/31/2022 2:54:00 PM
Just wonderful Izintombi! Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 8/31/2022 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, God Bless xxx
Date: 8/31/2022 6:07:00 AM
"contagious smiles" - Wow! Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 8/31/2022 6:15:00 AM
I tried hhey, haha...thank you so much, God Bless xo

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