When We Were We

Long before I lost you
to twisted embers
in your mind;

Before you dared not breach 
choking silence
with a touch of eager skin…


We
breathed the fire of Romans
into each other’s random souls 
across a room
with a single smile-

And found ourselves

Wrestling in red cars
out in parking lots
that gratefully never knew 
our names...

We
giggled at liquid nights
rippling in the wake of conversations 
that would disappoint 
stern fathers;

figuring the sun
was just a star 
with a lighter background...

We
transposed our arms
for a chorus of eternity those days;

Snuggling 
golden wrapped flesh,
and other dreams
found only 
an eyelash away...


Now,
Long after...

Your eyes extinguish empires
of Was-

But only
amidst symphonic ashes
of a time
when

We were We.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Sheart Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
Joseph Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 1:05 PM
lovely daring and exciting - congratulations on your featured poem, I look forward to reading more.
Mason Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 6:49 PM
"...amidst symphonic ashes of a time" is just a great line here Michele!! I too seem to infuse my memories with great crescendo's ... smile ... very well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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September 25, 2009 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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September 24, 2009 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the poetry competition with three poems, Michele! Luck and love, Carolyn
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September 24, 2009 at 12:51 PM
Michele, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 24, 2009 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on your 3 poems making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Michele. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 8:13 AM
This is all too familiar for me. Wonderful writing, Michele. Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week. Love and Light, Lainie.
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September 24, 2009 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michele. Love, Carol
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December 17, 2008 at 1:52 PM
So, I found Stacey and now Michele. l like the way you transpose, the way you modulate, exciting the listener, staying away from boredom. Boredom is the bain of most poets, who compose everything in the same key. You, my dear, are exciting to read and to listen to. Love, daver
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