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Your back, a shoreline my breath returns to, warm as tidewater held past midnight. I trace the hush between your shoulder blades — a silence taught to speak in skin. The room forgets its corners. Only the curve of us remains: two commas curling into a sentence neither of us dares to end. My knee behind yours, a lock finding its key. Even the sheets have stopped pretending they’re not listening. Outside, the moon lingers — a voyeur of our stillness. Inside, your exhale folds into mine like verses learning their rhyme.

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Date: 6/25/2025 10:09:00 AM
what a beautifully sensual poem Joel - I love it! hugs Jan xx
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Joel Hawksley
Date: 6/25/2025 10:20:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment; it's gratifying when someone appreciates your work.

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