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When We First Met

A fluttering feeling in my chest Butterflies dancing in my stomach Excitement shining in my eyes Passion overflowing my heart That was how I felt when my eyes first landed on yours When I saw you on the dance floor And we shared our first smile You asked me to dance With a flourish and a bow That made me giggle, so I accepted We twirled while the music flowed Your eyes shined with mirth You charmed me with your talk With every story you told I fell more and more in love Some may not believe That love can happen at first sight But I know it does, indeed Because I fell for you that hard Our love story has no end For we're together still Dancing our way through our days Sharing our lives and feels *** December 09, 2016 10th Place in the Contest: Free Verse About Love NEW or OLD Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 1/21/2017 5:04:00 AM
Charming indeed and the excitement is felt all through. Well expressed. Congrats.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/21/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sunita! :)
Date: 1/20/2017 7:42:00 PM
oh how wonderfully romantic Claudia hope you remain dancing together for many years to come:-) hugs jan xx
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Jan!!! We didn't met at a ball, but it was love at first sight... lol... he kept holding/shaking my hand almost a full minute when we were introduced... hehehe - we have a great marriage, so I can see us dancing for a long time ;) <3 - hugs back! xoxoxo
Date: 1/20/2017 1:54:00 PM
YAYAYAY! Congratulations Claudia! :D This is a very romantic poem - Love this one <3 <3 <3
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 6:51:00 PM
Yayyyyy - Thank You Sara! <3 - It was a great surprise on my friday :) xoxoxo
Date: 1/20/2017 1:29:00 PM
Coming back with congratulations for you!!! Wonderful my friend :D
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 6:49:00 PM
Yessssssssssssss <3 ;)
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 1:55:00 PM
I dance with you and Sara :D
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 1:35:00 PM
Yayyyyyyyyyy!!!! I know!!!! How amazing is that??? ***Doing happy dance for the second time today*** - thanks Darren! :* <3
Date: 1/20/2017 12:19:00 PM
beautiful Claudia! This reminds me of me and my hubby. We met at 16 now I'm 37...21 years and an 11 year old later, more in love than ever...congrats and thank you :)-luloo
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank You Laura!!!!! I met Hubby when I was 15, we're together for almost 30 yrs... totally in love by him still. I'm really honoured that you've chosen my poem. Thanks again and Hugs to you :*
Date: 12/29/2016 8:24:00 PM
Wow, Claudia, what a "feel good" poem. : ) Congratulations. (20 years for my wife and me.) Cheers, Doug.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/30/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, Doug!!! And congrats on being 20 yrs together :*
Date: 12/19/2016 1:48:00 AM
You are still together, and it's a wonderful love poem for a wonderful love :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/19/2016 5:13:00 AM
We didn't meet at a ball, but it was love at first sight, and we're together for almost 30 yrs ;) :* Thanks my friend <3

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