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When Things Get Too Difficult

an innocent baby was born a baby to love and to hold- a baby boy who was a delight of smiling bubbles and gurgles but as he grew it was evident he was different he was diagnosed with brain damage from birth and his life would be forever difficult and different he will never hold a job- yet he is a reader and reads quite mind boggling books and loves debates though those talks are brief before he moves on to another but what is missing is that thing that allows us to cope in this world- he has no life skills we, promised our mother on her death bed that we the kids would always take care of this boy-man and we will, oh yes no matter what happens we are his safe place when things get too difficult _____________________________ December 30, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/When Things Get Too Difficult Copyright Protected, ID 18-1099-530-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Early Jan. 2019 Standard Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 1/6/2019 5:26:00 PM
Your unconditional love for your brother shines I’ve this poem, Constance, congrats on your win. John
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2019 12:43:00 PM
John, thanks for the congrats and for seeing the love not just by me, but my siblings and spouses also have for this boy-man who came into this world broken, not because he asked to but just because. My mother used to blame herself, although the doctors told her it was nothing she did while pregnant, his brain just did not develop properly.
Date: 1/6/2019 4:04:00 PM
Revisiting this heart-rending write once again to wish you richly deserved kudos on your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2019 12:40:00 PM
Gershon, thank you so much for the congrats. This poem did not place in the original contest written for, so this win is sweet!
Date: 1/6/2019 3:59:00 PM
Sometimes, the Creator sends us someone to just love... This is SOOO BEAUTIFUL! THANK you!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2019 12:39:00 PM
Andrew, thanks for that great comment and the beautiful ~
Date: 12/30/2018 10:01:00 PM
Splits my heart in half. Unfortunately, I can relate all too well... Patience, Acceptance, and Love, ~ Gershon
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:42:00 PM
Gershon, thanks for the visit and for the compassion ~
Date: 12/30/2018 12:56:00 PM
This poem filled with love, compassion and dedication is so special :)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2018 7:12:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for your lovely compassion, the boy is my brother ~

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