When the Wind Blows

When the wind blows the leaves They dance in the breeze.

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Jasmine Koria

Date: 7/12/2018 12:37:00 PM

Simple and beautiful :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2018 5:43:00 PM

Hello jasmine,thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Fj Thomas

Date: 7/9/2018 4:45:00 PM

So they do :) Lovely Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/10/2018 8:22:00 AM

Hello F.J. Thomas so nice to meet you. The leaves do a lovely dance in the breeze.Thank you for the lovely comment.Have a nice day my friend.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/8/2018 9:45:00 PM

Darlene.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2018 1:57:00 PM

Hello Lyric Man it sounds like you have a good view of the beautiful stary sky. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.