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Often when we hear things we take it as the truth and nothing but the truth when in fact it has been made more interesting by the addition or subtraction of a word or two that could give it extra emphasis  --- and also change the meaning.  By the same token we often see things that appear to be more than it is. Before we start branding someone it's best to find out exactly what was going on instead of drawing our own conclusions.                                                         The Bible tells us in the Book of Proverbs 17:28  "EVEN A FOOL WHEN HE HOLDETH HIS PEACE IS COUNTED WISE AND HE THAT SHUTTETH HIS LIPS IS ESTEEMED A MAN OF UNDERSTANDING."

Don't take for truth all that you hear, And believe only half what you see; For when you do you oft get things wrong, On this you will have to agree, For people embellish the things that they say, To add import and give it more color; Oft giving their story a whole different turn, Turning truth into lies like a trawler, Dragging their net in an effort to catch, Some poor innocent fish unawares. Not wishing to cause undue concern, But to make themselves look like they care; And then when the story comes back to you, And it's been retold a few times, It's oft brand new news you've not heard before, For it's changed with the passage of time; So pay close attention to what's said to you, And remember, repeat not a word, For when the truth comes out and the true story's told, And it's known what really occurred, You'll be the one who started it all, Trying to look wise, in the know. Your story, your words have come home to roost, And now it's a whole different show.

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Date: 2/10/2021 2:32:00 AM
Loved every word of it including the intro and biblical verse. I have learnt it the hard way to keep my mouth shut. Have a wonderful day ahead friend. Take care Rama
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Judy Ball
Date: 2/15/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Rama. God Bless, JB
Date: 2/9/2021 7:42:00 PM
Now, just how big was that fish?! lol. Another great write -- 'Vintage Judy Ball.' Love it. Thanks, gw
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:33:00 AM
Not very big. Some poor scrawny little guy who bothered no one. Thanks bunches Gershon, God Bless, JB
Date: 2/9/2021 7:56:00 AM
Don't you remember when we were young and we played broken telephone and you'd whisper to someone sitting or standing next to you and by the time it reached the 10th person, it was nothing like the original sentence. Hey Jude, great poem!
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Judy Ball
Date: 2/9/2021 2:35:00 PM
For sure Jennifer. Thanks bunches, God Bless, JB
Date: 2/8/2021 11:43:00 AM
Hi Judy, You have penned some good advice. I agree; we must not believe everything we hear. A person’s original story is not the same when it reaches them again; it has been changed several times-Alexis
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Date: 2/8/2021 4:56:00 PM
Ain't it the truth and when it does come back to you if you are innocent and others are saying you said things you never said it's hard to make anyone believe you. Best to keep the lips zipped at all times. Thanks bunches my friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 2/8/2021 10:53:00 AM
Great advice. A story repeated often loses it's truth. ~~
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Date: 2/8/2021 4:52:00 PM
For sure. It's the thing legends are made of . Thanks bunches Victor. God Bless, JB

Book: Shattered Sighs