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When the Moon Smiles

When the moon wakes up and smiles
Crickets begin to chirp from their balconies
Bats wake up and go to hunt their prey
But trees are silent, only waving to the world

Mice crawl to fill their bellies with stolen food
Clouds spread their arms to cover moon’s face
For dancers without music to roam the villages
In the silence of doves that love to coo, whisper

When the moon smiles unsparingly with creatures
Oceans catch cold and blow wet dust in faces
As hyenas laugh with the fisherman’s goats
With king of cats flashing eager torchy eyes

When the moon smiles in the countryside
Some creatures enter their shells of isolation
Hunters enjoy, cowards regret and the sleeping lie
For they know the smiles never turn into laughter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/30/2016 4:19:00 PM
Hi Solomon. Great use of language, beautiful poem!
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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 12/3/2016 6:13:00 AM
Very kind of you, Vinson. Stand blessed. Solomon

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