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When the Equi Knocks

it has been a bit of a bad Summer in some respects but as Autumn is about to fall our black walnut tree has already lost it's leaves and dropped what few nuts it had the squirrels don't seem worried lazily leaving them on the ground the mulching mower rides over them cracking them open perhaps a sign of an easy Winter

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Date: 9/21/2019 11:09:00 AM
Really interesting structure. It feels like the poem is falling down through space like your walnut leaves. Was that the intention?
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/21/2019 1:35:00 PM
No intention at all Robert, but I'm glad it works that way for you. Thanks.

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