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When the Bough Breaks

this darkened world cries like these skies I hear the moans of winded gusts echoing down the streets the branches snapping like lost minds as the trees topple downward I trembles like leaves breaking free twirling around spiraling down these streets littered with graffiti of the aftermath of fury lines drawn lines downed roads closed like minds as we sit in the dark eclipsed beneath the wail of sirens before silence breaks with dawn the break of horizon bloodied like the streets but we can't see beyond the clouds of smoky skies as we choke on fear (we've been having some violent storms here, loss of power, roads closed, we have riots here, and here the sirens, but no one knows if they are in reference to the storms or the riots... it was kind of nice being away from the plague of the world for a little bit and just be able to clear your mind and relax outside between the storms)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/8/2020 6:30:00 PM
Another excellent write Sandy, so sad you have storms and riots on top of everything else that's going on. Enjoyed! Glad your muse has returned!
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:40:00 PM
Look at trouble...this 2020 storm is devastating...Virus, Riots and climatic destruction...this is the year of fear...
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Date: 6/7/2020 1:27:00 PM
- Sounds like many "different" storms, dear Sandra ... wish I could share my peaceful place with you ... just the sound of beautiful bird song ... no fear ... no fight ... no thought of viruses - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 1:19:00 PM
Fine penning Sandy, telling well all you're going through at present with good imagery and insightful thought too. Keep safe my dear friend, Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 6/7/2020 12:50:00 PM
You are having a lot to contend with Sandra, with the virus, storms and those criminals out rioting, using that poor man's death as an excuse to plunder is a new low. Stay safe Tom
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:28:00 AM
Powerful emotions--the ending stanza says it all. Excellent write, as always, Sandy.
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Date: 6/7/2020 6:33:00 AM
Sounds like much anguish in your part of the world, Sandy, maybe one day life will get back to normal. Your verse portrays the times well. Stay safe. Hugs, John
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Date: 6/7/2020 12:54:00 AM
This is wonderful Sandra. I love your use of metaphors to convey the insanity of it all. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:22:00 PM
Very well put Sandra. If we knew as much about mental health as we do about physical health, an epidemic of hate would be considered just as dangerous as the COVID-19 pandemic
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