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When Sunset Bleeds

Behold the lit splendor of an arcade that bleeds her copper shawl, its final glow awaiting dusk to grasp last flares of blade, when decimal of time changes the flow and in repose, glazed orb succumbs to row. ````````````` Theme # 3 Sunset Contest of Skat Old Poem

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2016 11:43:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2016 11:27:00 AM

Such incredibly imagery Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/1/2016 10:46:00 AM

You are in your natural element here, for me you truly shine. Happy New Year! Hugs Rick.

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 10:18:00 AM

Nette, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2012 10:14:00 PM

NETTE, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in Francine Roberts' contest... these are some nice winning poems in her "Top five Sunsets" ... always~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2012 1:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Top Five Sunsets" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/26/2012 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations once again nette good stuff xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2012 11:03:00 PM

Awesome win, Nette. Congrats AGAIN tonight!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/25/2012 8:04:00 PM

Breathtaking, Nette! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/25/2012 3:39:00 PM

I'm sure your area of the world has so many fantastic sunset...it's very different over trees and mountains than over oceans! Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & love

Painted Hunter

Date: 7/25/2012 12:33:00 PM

Oh my...This is outstanding...vivid and calm all at the same time! I just can't get enough. Congrats again!

Sidney Beck

Date: 7/25/2012 12:06:00 PM

its just so unfair Young N......lets face it, the only reason you are higher placed than me is because your poetry is better............well ok you beat me this time -- but just wait for the REAL contest coming up........with LOL and all my best wishes and congrats Young N

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/25/2012 11:26:00 AM

You write with a very poetic pen, Nette. Should have been number one. Love, Joyce

David Williams

Date: 7/25/2012 10:46:00 AM

Nette, super congrats on your win, excellent write...I need to live where you are..David

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/25/2012 8:36:00 AM

congrats on yur win nette, well done

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/18/2012 9:50:00 AM

A captivating words, Nette. Hugs, Dinda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 8:35:00 PM

Nette...oooo..this is eerie...I love it.. is it for a contest.... xox..pd

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/16/2012 7:28:00 PM

I beautiful sunset, though it is dark I can see your light shining far.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2012 12:42:00 PM

Reads like one of the top winners for the contest..Good luck..Enjoyed reading the descriptive lines penned by your creative pen..I incorrectly stated something on my poem about the Poulter's Measure..The poem is a form of Poulter's Measure that was used in many works by Emily Dickinson..It is Iambic Heptameter writtnen in Ballard Stanza which is 8,6,8,6 with one rhyme the 2nd and 4th stanza..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2012 12:42:00 PM

Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/16/2012 11:49:00 AM

What at incredibly happy write here Nette! The image you bestowed upon us is greater than the suns private flight through time with all its colors beached onto us! What a glorious display of hope through tenderness my friend! I love your poem! Great Work!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/16/2012 11:43:00 AM

if this was for my contest it hasn't been entered

Kash Poet

Date: 7/16/2012 11:05:00 AM

Amazing poetry by you Nette!!Love the imagery very much.Best wishes to you!!

Painted Hunter

Date: 7/16/2012 10:45:00 AM

Just beautiful, Nette....oh, I love your work!!!

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 7/16/2012 10:01:00 AM

happy to read this poem now .so wonderful .thank you for sharing .jk