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When Summer Is Gone

In twilight's early shadows, when summer has passed
      A wandering lost soul whose heart has strayed
         A soul adrift upon an autumn night
            Longing for love's warmth and to bathe in a deeper ecstasy

Eyes once strong now weakened with age, blinded by tears
    Longing to be free
      In this autumnal time when some freedoms reign
         How wonderful it would feel to be free from all earthly pain

Needing a connection and loving hands
     A kind soul to guide through the rest of this troubled land
        Just a few kind words and a gentle touch
          Would help this autumn to heal a heart

Love a well-known awesome balm, would heal emotions, and
      Chase those shadows which tear us apart
         At summer's end when those dark, dark nights
            Appear upon the scene chasing my sad heart

Let me find solace and a loving soul
     Who understands summer is gone
          Then winter will come, and we'll be alone
              The passage will open to carry us back home
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Date: 8/10/2024 9:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2024 10:26:00 AM
Why, thank you, David. Sara K
Date: 8/9/2024 11:38:00 AM
Love the last stanza! You have truly written such a beautiful piece.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Karen. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 7/25/2024 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "When Summer Is Gone" write. Many love the summer & will cry in a few week when it is gone. Do not worry for it will return. I will be happy to see/feel fall with the cooler days. What a pretty picture you have here...  Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/25/2024 2:32:00 PM
Yes, the cycles of spring, summer, fall and winter do continue. I like the changes, but spring and fall are the best times as far as outdoor comfort are concerned. I have seasonal allergies so both of those are rough on me in that respect. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara K
Date: 7/22/2024 10:49:00 AM
A wonderful poem, vivid and alluring journey through summer. Love it!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2024 11:29:00 AM
Why, thank you, Tom. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 7/17/2024 10:29:00 AM
Longings, healing of body, mind and soul, and hope for a home beyond this earth! Hugs ~ Kim
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/17/2024 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. You've got it. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 7/17/2024 8:01:00 AM
Dear Sara, I really think you speak artistically about life. Your images are showing loneliness, aging, and the desire for connection and comfort. Yes, I feel that life transitions from summer to autumn for me. For those of us over the age of 60, we face life's challenges, we long for love, understanding, and companionship to help us navigate the difficult times and find true peace through our Lord and Savior in our twilight years. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/17/2024 10:32:00 AM
Why, thank you, Daniel. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Yes, I am now way over sixty and sliding into my octogenarian years. Life has about been lived for us and it is not an easy part of life stages in which we find ourselves. Your visit is delightful. Sara K
Date: 7/16/2024 11:24:00 PM
this poem speaks to me.Thank you Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/17/2024 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, Gergory. Your visit is delightful and uplifting. Sara K
Date: 7/16/2024 9:29:00 PM
Love this poem which is more philosophical than environmental. We have to be sensitive to the change that will come on man when summer fades and autumn and winter assail. It is a time when we long for love's warmth. Great poem, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/17/2024 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Yes, it is more emotionally dramatic than about the environment. Your comments are encouraging. Sara K
Date: 7/16/2024 3:56:00 PM
Love the effect that your pattern made. Loved what you said at the end of the poem regarding winter coming.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/17/2024 3:22:00 AM
Yes, Andrea, winter does get here doesn't it. Thanks for the kind review. Sara K
Date: 7/16/2024 2:30:00 PM
Very beautiful- it seems you are in a dark night of soul- hope autumn persuades you of its magic...:)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/17/2024 3:22:00 AM
Paige, life is not always perfect, and we have times of feeling alone and venerable to our emotions. Thank you for stopping by and reading my work. Sara K
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