When Snow Falls

When snow falls before the leaves do ~ Old Man Winter's just tightened the screw

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/21/2021 4:58:00 PM

lovely monoku.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/14/2021 1:25:00 PM

Verycool Panagiota

Bill Baker

Date: 11/12/2021 9:38:00 PM

Interesting way of putting it Gershon, I like it. Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 6:55:00 PM

For monokus, I use an old Jack Nicklaus putter. (Whoa, I hope you're at least chuckling at this one, Bill... If not, back to the practice putting green) ~ Puttin Things Mildly, Gershon

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/12/2021 8:44:00 PM

If Old Man Winter’s screw comes loose, what can we expect the weather to do? … Belle

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 6:44:00 PM

If OMW's screw is loose, we may just get some bellows from a moose. (Pretty bad there, eh? Gotta go sharpen my head -- I mean my pencil... maybe both). Cheers, Gershon

Valsa George

Date: 11/12/2021 7:39:00 PM

Wow.... brevity is the soul of wit! A clever weather forecast... !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 6:47:00 PM

OK! Brevity being the soul of wit, I'm so tall I'd better sit... Thanks, Valsa. Joy and Light, Gershon

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2021 2:50:00 PM

Cute one. I know in some places they have already had snow. I wonder if that means it is going to be a long cold winter. I enjoyed reading this work. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 6:43:00 PM

No, no, no, NO WAY. It's going to be a mild, mild, mild winter the world over! And I can cite 150 million lunatic climate change progressives here in the USA who will swear to that. LOL! ... Thanks for YOUR visits, Sara. Excelsior! ~ gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/12/2021 1:01:00 PM

LOL…i’ll say!! And the leaves must be peeved to say the least. You make my day!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 6:38:00 PM

I just love your comment, Kim -- 'and the leaves must be peeved!' -- Pretty fancy-shmancy! Smiles, Gershon