When She Closes Her Eyes

Firm, full olive breast a virgin, at twenty three?
Perfect as beauty yet, her true candy
Awaiteth just below...
Purity, smooth as dreams
She beckons..
Shaven, with traces love's,, cream....
Her lips, whom glisten; parting skies; tinted
Blonde tresses curls, tossed to the side such, her joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 2, 2016 at 4:06 AM
Hello! This poem is just unique. Wow... I like it a lot. You wording and imaginary have blown up my mind. Such a sweet romantic poem. All boys will like it. I love this write. Last two lines were outstanding.
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August 31, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Good to see you back posting. How have you been?
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